really bad

http://img20.imageshack.us/img20/9498/one2h.jpg
thats vers 1
and this is vers 2
http://img132.imageshack.us/img132/8669/onehmt.jpg
dun be harsh :( T_T im noob... crisis of art for me ^^^^^
verse 3
http://img132.imageshack.us/img132/2739/one3.jpg

The c4ds and stock and brushes used=Epic! The render doesn't really attract. Can do with more lighting IMO.

you call that bad!?! i LOVE it really nice c4d work i cant decide which version i like better!

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made me happy guys :>
just i though its bad cuz i hmm text sucks and i dunno witch verse better O.o

I like the second one alot better. The colours seem to match up a bit nicer and the blues help to soften the image a bit more.
The Linda text is a bit hard to read because of the close colour choice to the colours behind it, but the C4D work is very nice. :D

the text is almost perfect linda, ^^ ive decided i like v2 better, more of a colour variation

Linda, how could you call that bad.
The colours are amazing, and the C4D use is perfect!
Some shadows could be a help to the realism of the model in the middle.
Other than that, it's perfect, really great job. :D

I like the third one you just released. The focal stands out a bit more.

Linda
You're the most pesimistic person in the world :D
Wow. this is amazing. Truly you're best.
Colors are really nice
You used C4Ds perfectly
Only thing, I would keep the text straight.
Make a tutorial!!

aw Thank You guys !
sorry Garis O.O im pesemistic - - , i just rly though its bad O.O
but thank you much !
ill try make tut someday, just i dunno how - -
and i got this week 2 big exams so i dunno when its realeased ,
but i can try :)

V2 nice c4d work text fits perfectly ^_^

its not bad as it looks :D its smexy lovely tag :D

thanks ! :D :)