First sprite sig ever

first sprite sig i did for a battle.
cnc?
http://i448.photobucket.com/albums/q...ritekensig.png
http://i448.photobucket.com/albums/q...itekensig2.png
v2 up
http://i448.photobucket.com/albums/q...itekensig3.png
v3up
and a v4
http://i448.photobucket.com/albums/q...itekensig4.png

not bad, the left is a little empty and its all really saturated and monotone imo
i like the effect around the sprite
text isn't bad, maybe nudge it to the left a few px
border ish necessary, 1px around the edges maybe
good first sprite tag :D

thanks man ! ill edit it in a bit, gotta do some studying>_< thanks though. anyone else?

i may seem too hars, but..

your sig - way oversharpened for starters, too harsh for my eye

2nd as miril said above, too saturated

the only thing i like in it is a text font, sorry mate but im trying to be honest :)

but its ok for your first attempt, i dont think i could do any better

i find it very harsh on the eye but gd try for first sprite defo wck a border 1 px white i reckon

v2 up im not sure about it tho :\
http://i448.photobucket.com/albums/q...itekensig2.png

http://i448.photobucket.com/albums/q...itekensig3.pngv3 actaully

v2 for the win, it turned out a sexy sprite sig when you removed that ugly sharpening

yeah idk what i was thinking, i think its a debate between v2 and v4 on which i should submit

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Originally Posted by Dron

i may seem too harsh, but..

your sig is way oversharpened for starters, too harsh for my eyes

2nd as miril said above, too saturated

the only thing i like in it is the text, sorry mate but im trying to be honest :)

but its ok for your first attempt, i dont think i could do any better

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Quoted for truth.

Sprites are quite hard to work with and you havnt done bad at all. However its hard to make out the sprite, it should be defined more.