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Ohio guys, long time since i made an lp, so gotta take of my hands
tried a very different style then i usually do, no bg just the girl stock, so i m kinda confused is it good or not, that is upto uto decide :D
CNC :D
http://fc02.deviantart.com/fs48/i/20...c_Majinbuu.jpg
Cool Cool:)
It looks good:)
Only thing is the angled line in there, doesn't fit in imo.
Text could need a different font maybe.
Anywho, good job:)
Really nice work Buu :)
Love text.Especially that effect with dots or something like that.
And agree with silent(about that yellow angled line).But maybe if you'd make it dark and bigger,you know,like frame part,it would fit there?
Great work Kid.
thanks guyz :D
ah about the angled line, i first thought of making a faint room outline so that it matches the concept of flying below, but then i forgot lol
Nyahahah awesome buu, some great efx
text is ok and that line is a little weird
but all in all great man
i wanna see more lp's from you!!
woot awesome work bro gr8 style i wish i could make something like that
everything is nice specially the text i really like that one
GJ keep it up bro
Great job dude.
i love the color mixing.
for me IMO, i don't like the blurred area at the middle and look at her left foot/feet
it see's it cut it out.
all in all very nice.
keep it up brother. .
thanks guyz XD
ah i think i over blurred it
w8 i will edit it
I love the color, and the whole piece overall. Although that one C4D right behind the girls head, the gold one, seems to stick out pretty badly. It seems odd I guess because nothing else in the piece looks as 3D as that does.
ah, thanks for the tip, but i kinda like it, though i think its poorly blended,lol
thanks for the comment :D
Edited with lower blur and a little change, how is it now?
Personally im not feeling the blur at all, in my opinion pieces like this need no blur or sharpen at all. Apart from that, i love the text fits well, but i think that the girl should have been left the normal colour (her skin and stuff) but thats just my two cents.
I like the concept, and the overall composition. There are a few areas I think you could work on though:
1. The stock you used is a little low quality on the edges. Like near the feet, the cut is a little jagged, and I guess you tried to hide it by blurring, but that makes the most important features less noticeable, and kind of dampens the image. I love seeing sharp and evenly contrasted stocks being used because it shows your mastery of the technique.
2. The colors seem a bit too abrupt for me. I think a little use of restraint on the number of hues used might have done some good for this piece. Not so much purple to green, but a focused distribution. A matching palette would make this a much better LP.
Overall nice job. I like the feeling you put across, and I like the mood of the piece. Gj
now i doont have any words to say lol
ok tbh, the stock is a little lq and yeah i tried to hide it using blurs.
and ur second point is absolutely right tooo, i used random brushing there just to change the mood of thepiece.
Thanks for the advanced critique both of you. thats what i was looking forward to.
Happy now.
Well i think it looks just great!
Good job! :D
