Retry at Signature

here is my retry at making a signature lol
tell me what you think :D

http://img21.imageshack.us/img21/8705/gdforumsig2.png

i like the idea by it butstill needs work text isnt that good umm you did alot of grunge style brushing and you gotta have a focal thats easy to see and the actual main focus keep workin tho man your getting better :)

^Agreed, cant really add more to that. Its midnight and my brains starting to stop functioning.

do you guys have any suggestions? I am kinda new at this kind of stuff and don't really have any idea of what to do. I am self taught... so...

I do like it, you are improving, try reading tutorials, to get some cool effects, and different techniques :). Will get better in no time.

^^^ eveything he said man ^^^ follow some tuts and then change some stuff in the tut to it will be your own work on there concept :)

luks gd bud kinda lyk fire.

I think you need to focus on bringing out the focal point more, maybe read some tutorials but dont worry you'll get better with practice

I was self taught as well and the only way that you can make ur style better in the first place is to follow a few tutorials to the letter and then start changing stuff. You'll slowly develop your own style and own knowledge of what looks good to you.

thanks guys :D

Im not feeling the font, other than that i like it