Shinobi | Another LP

http://fc09.deviantart.com/fs47/i/20...Shadowtuga.jpg

http://shadowtuga.deviantart.com/art...nobi-130011051

CnC? :)

Nice use of splatters, however I don't think they work too well with the moon. You might want to make his foot a bit clearer as well (The one that's kicking).

This could easily be great.

Remove the splatters of the moon
Have a black area from the bottom of the image to the bottom of his foot

Maybe then play about with some lighting on the moon.

it looks like a painting great job man keep it up :)

Thanks guys. Maybe a do another version of the LP :)

Yea ^^ good job can't add to anythinbg thats been said:)

let me give you a real critique,
splatters are overdone, the background itself lacks a lot. The ground is poorly done. Looks like this LP wasn't even over 25mins maybe even 10 to me. Take your time on LP's and then move forth with more detailed assumptions rather then random looking splatters everywhere. The only good placement on this LP is the text, thats it. Work on it more.

I love this, its different

looks really good, I like this ninja, but I dont like that "moon".. its odd

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Originally Posted by Garis

looks really good, I like this ninja, but I dont like that "moon".. its odd

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Why am i always agreed with garis xD lol.

The actual render of the ninja doesn't fit with the rest of the cartoony style.
I would focus on the direction of the splatters and work on the background and the ground, they are very weak points.
Placement of the text is perfect and the font is nice.
Just take more time.

xJTRx: Your attitude is that no one before you gave "a real critique", this is art and it's subjective, you may have knit picks about parts of this LP and other people may have theirs. Lighten up a bit.