Fly With Style

My first piece in about 6-7 months, or more I can't remember. Let me know what you think, be nice though heh. Cheers.

http://img17.imageshack.us/img17/1239/guyonpolecopy.jpg

nice man

style is good.. to much brightness, left side needs something more to much black. render could use some brush work.. not bad sig.. :)

text is really good. left side is a bit blank and the lightingon the right seems forced. but goodjob. :D

Looks great! just needs a bit more blending and some more c4ds to fill in that black.
Nice job! :D

simple but nice.

I like the lighting effects.

The flow is great and the lighting is really cool. Text fails and the left side is a bit bare but it is cool piece. Like it.

text works :) but i think sig is way to dark, but i like the light and colour :)

its nice man i love the text and i wish there was more to the sig on the left side and maybe not as bright on the right side but its still good :)

Hey guys, you're right the right side does look a little dead, but what would you put there to make it work and not ruin the feel of the piece, or clutter it up at all. I'm open for suggestions but I don't wanna crowd it up or ruin it. Thanks alot though for all the input, really appreciate it.:)

you could do a little brush work. add another c4d.. or just a simple faded stock that would fit nice..