Gundam..

Finally made something thats okay.. i guess.
http://i282.photobucket.com/albums/k...IX/Gundam1.png
CnC

Eh I don't really like the smudging and the C4ds are messy but I do like the colors.

too much smudging... the render is blended in too much and its form is getting distorted... also seems very pixelated in some areas... but thats just me. :D

hard to see the render good try tho man keep workin man

Really like the colors on this. As for the left side, I don't really like it as much as the right side. Maybe if you cropped it or did something to fill the space a little.

Since i cant seem to edit my post, i will post V2 down here;
http://i282.photobucket.com/albums/k.../Gundam1v2.png

a little better but i dont like the flow.. needs something more on the left..

I'm not actually sure what it is. The image all looks alright, but because I can't understand it, I'm a bit confused.
The left area is also very bland. Might be an idea to look at filling it somehow.

Uhm nutter, it's a gundam from the gundam wing anime series.
Anyways
v3 : http://i282.photobucket.com/albums/k.../Gundam1v3.png

v3 :) i like the colours alot, tho i dont understand well what render is O.O [sorry]
but my eyes like this sig over all

This is the render...
i used the one on the right..
http://i41.tinypic.com/302cgzn.png

On the left side you have C4ds going all different directions, clean that up. Get rid of some of that smudging on the bottom of the render. Maybe move your render to the left some if you can so you don't have all that empty space.