http://i596.photobucket.com/albums/t...0/undead_2.png
http://i596.photobucket.com/albums/t...710/wargod.png
tell me what you think can be improved on please
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http://i596.photobucket.com/albums/t...0/undead_2.png
http://i596.photobucket.com/albums/t...710/wargod.png
tell me what you think can be improved on please
For some reason I like the first one, but that text is yucky...you should work on lighting more too, not that the lighting is bad but you see how its really bright at the top of the skull? Your main light source should be up there more.
they look nice. but don't place the text in the corner :D
The effects are pretty cool. They portray neat flow but the depth could do with more work. The colours in both are great! But the text fails. Don't place them so in the corner, and try for simpler fonts.
http://img2.imageshack.us/img2/6103/77695014.png
Hows that..?
The text is a bit dark but the placement and font is way better! Still need to add the depth though but it is a good piece!
hmmm, well i'll let him do that hah
wow joekz love that text. where did u get it?
which one the nexus or the undead?
Both. i havnt relly experimented with text much but i want text like that
Nexus:Eccentric Std
Undead: Lucida Blackletter
http://i596.photobucket.com/albums/t...0/undead_2.png
The text isn't very good here, the font choice and the placement. The effects are really nice though. Without the text this piece would be a lot better. Light source seems a bit strong though. Tone it down a bit in my opinion.
http://i596.photobucket.com/albums/t...710/wargod.png
Same thing with the text here. The colours don't seem to work with the theme but at the same time I like it.
Your really coming along. Keep at it.
Its all looks great except for the text..Fix it and it would be an awesome sig..
I like them. 1st is the best. Text needs work yeah. But very well done. They are fantastic
the top 1 is nice the bottom isnt so nice. the top light sorce just does not fit in at all. try focusing more on ur flow colours for now i think ;). and id say take away the text completly. but if u want it there so bad put it nearer the focal(the skull)
The new version looks way better. I like it
