http://i222.photobucket.com/albums/d...rayer2copy.jpg
CnC is always sweet :)
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http://i222.photobucket.com/albums/d...rayer2copy.jpg
CnC is always sweet :)
Nice stock, pentool and so on. But to left is not doing wonders for me.
lol yeah its more of a filler, and i didnt really do nething to it other than blur it haha so yeah nothin special there
lol. well i like it cept that :D
Yeah i like the pentool but i can barely read the text, i dont like the left i think its better when u have one main focal but its good
color is good but bad placement of the backup render.
Another nice piece of work as always ex, but do agree with what sober stated.
Everything seems fine except the left lol :D . nice effect.the text is kinda hard to see.
lol the first version got deleted :D . Anyway looks better to me. But still the text is hard to see.
yeah i deleted it lol, and yeah thats kinda intentional :P
I've added the updated image to the original post. Currently the Edit feature is only able to be used for 30 minutes after posting.
It'll also prevent confusion and people constantly posting, "Your Sig is removed". :)
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The Colours and Pen Tooling is looking good. The lines help with the flow of the image and creates a nice focal point in the top right.
The Text is also in a good position as it gives something for your eyes to move to, but doesn't force them to jump around the image.
The outline of the shirt needs some work. I can see a solid line in some areas that makes it look like a crop. Try using the blur/eraser tools to smooth the edges of the girl to help make her look like part of the background. :)
