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hello ppl... i've just made a mario sig and want some coments and criticism please provide the following:
1)C&C
2)marks out of 10
3)things i should do to make it better (be specific)
4)is it better than my current signature?
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v7...clnd/mario.gif
thank you ppl
The mario needs to stand out more and be the centerpeice. And the colours kinda clash. I like the text but i don't think it looks so good in the centre.
8/10 - could get a 9 if the mario stood out a bit more , after all it's a mario sig ;)
Hmm it's hard to say , touch the mario one up a bit and it'll be better.
The colors dont match mario. Make it a nice red or blue... then it will suit him better... text is a little in a random spot too. Make it in the lower left or somwhere in that area.
i brought out mario a little bit... i'm gonna try changin the color....
how's this
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v7...d/mariored.gif
I liked the green one better. I dont know. The clashing seemed to take my eye to Mario. I really enjoyed the green one, although I think Mario could stand to pop out a little more. And he could look nicer in the center, or a little more closer to it.
7.5/10 only cause I think the green one kicked more ass.
second one looks a whole lot better,
1) looks pretty good, but your mario doesnt stand out enough, it seems like render like that do not look as good blended but rather "unblended"
2)7/10 (cool background, but very simple)
3) unblend mario, stick just him there and dont worry about blending, basically, stick him on. you text looks pretty cool, and so is your background, but i dont know that a grunge background goes well with a mario pic.
4) stick with your current, its awesome.
I'm sorry but I still think the green one was better. Mario seems lost in the red one because he matches so well. I liked the way that he stood out on the green one, I just didnt like how he was hidden on the right side. But I agree about not having him blend in. Make him stand out!
ok, thanx for the comments... i'm gonna un-blend mario....
Mario is a bright , colourful character. And you have him portrayed as dark and almost evil * dun dun dun! * , you should try a brighter background maybe...
That Mario signature looks very good dude. The blending you used is great.
The only thing that I can find wrong is that Mario is a little to dark, and needs to be brightened up.
ok....
on both mario has been un-blended(a little bit) and on the red one i made the background lighter
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v7...d/mariored.gif
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v7...clnd/mario.gif
Green one , yeh i really like it now, good job ^.^
Like I been saying. Green from the get go. I like it now that he's unblended. But I think the text should be shifted down a bit. Near the middle or so. And move Mario in a little more. He's barely there and its his sig!! Lol.
what happened to marios cheek? also, i agree that you should move him over, and i like the placement of you text on the green one.
i also happen to like where the text is... and i've tried moving mario to the center, and to the right... but it looks akward.... (he is turning to his left so he should be "seeing" the rest of the signature with his eyes....)
^^well apparently koopa threw up on him.... lol... the picture i got came like that (and since it says "mario's on the job" it's only normal for him to be a bit dirty...)Quote:
what happened to marios cheek?
PS: demo your signature has now a porno ad.... lol
