Shift Sig?

http://i34.tinypic.com/34odips.png

Lemme know what you think. Im up for fixing anything you guys see is wrong. its my second one since about 5 months ago :)

Wow, this is great, but the text is a bit off if you ask me.

to be honest it looks completely random. all of the effects look like they were randomly placed and just added for the sake of adding effects. pay more attention to the composition rather than adding random effects "just because"

http://i38.tinypic.com/2crvi9u.png

Maybe a simple "Shift" with a white Impact font will do the trick.

Alright i made it in white on my older post

Now it's a bit better, but the text is too big.

oook lol..

http://i37.tinypic.com/o0c614.png

that should be the last revision i make

Now it's perfect. ^^ (To me, at least)

hmm i dont like the purple. its too vivid and unnatural, especially with the dryer colours around it, like the yellows and greys. also the swoosh towards the bottom of the car makes it look less real, but i love how the purple thingy almost looks like its eating the car (in my mind...) you did a great job,and overall it looks very natural :]

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Originally Posted by gr4ph1kP4ND4

hmm i dont like the purple. its too vivid and unnatural, especially with the dryer colours around it, like the yellows and greys. also the swoosh towards the bottom of the car makes it look less real, but i love how the purple thingy almost looks like its eating the car (in my mind...) you did a great job,and overall it looks very natural :]

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Thanks bro.. i do agree the purple was a lil strange.. and yea i was trying to make it look like it was coming over the car.. Over the windshield is where i think your talking about but yea that was the idea :)