Eminem

Hey guys, I need some help rather than CnC

Doing a request for a friend of mine and she requested a 500x200 with Eminem. Heres how far i am with it atm:

http://img4.imageshack.us/img4/5323/...toxiccandy.png

What do i do with it now?

The canvas is too big imo and their is way too much empty space on the left. I would like to see this in color rather than black and white.

only reason the canvas is so big is cos thats what she requested. There isnt a colour version either ^^ the stock was a B&W

Wooahh it probably would look good in color.. umm add some gradient maps to make sum color : D the effects look great. overall this could be a lp maybe since its bigger then a sig xD

I've got a sig sized version cos i truely hate making stuff bigger than 400 cos i find it hard to fill a big canvas. I will post it up with perhaps a gradient or two on when i get home. Currently still in college and therefore Imageshack is blocked. = /

http://img79.imageshack.us/img79/487...ndyresized.jpg
This is the resized verison which i prefer.

http://img79.imageshack.us/img79/594...ndyresized.png

I think i ruined it with the colour >.< the background looks better but Em looks shite now

The updates are much better, but I suggest a sharpen for both.

Out of curiousity u seeing it all slightly blurry? They all seem blurry when i put them on here >.<

Eh...it's a tiny bit blurry. :(

But it's no big deal. ^^

All my sigs are blurry here, Its like its in a Guassian blur 15 Pix all the time >.< i can only see them blurry, no matter what format i save them.

The vector arrows don't fit at all.

I'd agree with you, I made the origional (first post, also with a resized version) and the person I made it for said it looked too plane, which i agree with. Thats one of the reasons i posted it up here. I need to know what to do next with the origional, bearing in mind that its the same size as the v2

http://img79.imageshack.us/img79/487...ndyresized.jpg

If u want great colors try ad some gradient maps to the b&w version try,try and try till its perfect KIU m8

^ I tried that, i may have another go but it doesnt turn out great.

So is anyone actually going to answer my question about what i should do with it? I get that it would look better in colour but what do i need to ADD? CnC done now need the help. ty in advance

There is too much of black to the left, add more color there.

^Mate not useful, said in previous post i know it needs colour. In the ORIGIONAL resized version do i need to add APART from colour.

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