Abandoned...

Back again with some new c4ds on hand:

http://i36.tinypic.com/2afby38.png

CnC, i know the text problem.

Improvements?

hmm... maybe don't smudge her, make the c4ds go over her and idk the c4d collors don't really fit there in my opinion, maybe some gradiants or something

Yea i know, gradients would make her a little mono. Maybe turn up the opacity would help... Try later, and thx in advance for giving me the renders.

If you want to smudge your render, duplicate it and play with the blending modes, it looks better if your focal point isn't thrown across the tag.

I think you could make this look better with a Purple -> Orange Gradient Map set on Hue/Saturation with a mid-low opacity.

Thanks for the tip! Anymore CnC for me to improve?

Just one more thing: your C4Ds don't blend well with your background. You should find some way to make them work, perhaps a Hue/Saturation Adjustment Layer over your C4Ds?

That would make a little mono will it? Will try though. Anymore CnC pls?

Well, don't rape it with saturation, and you'll be fine.

k, thx, anymore suggestion ?

i got same thing, u gotta blend those c4d. design is all about making it realistic and c4d look just like they are thrown there keep it up its gonna be fine

Man I felt like a failure ya know? My signatures juz... dun work :( Any good tips for me ?

follow along with a c4d type sig tutorial so that you can learn the steps to blend them in with your renders would be my suggestion, as of now its not blended enough, they stand out too much. the sig is nicely composed, and text needs work, better tho from ur last text style. also agreed about earlier statements about not smudging the render so much. post a version two in this thread with all the above mentioned adjustments so we can see it fixed, and give more cnc, good work m8 its not a failure.

Hey thanks, that was juz a test which i found it quite good. I made another one but not very good to me, see what you can u can do ? I post it on a new thread. But anymore CnC?

hey i used that render before ^.^ sorry totally random. the worst part is the colours dont match at all. blue and orange clash just as much as red and purple (due to the same concept: theyre contrasting colours)
when trying to find a good colour, you want to match colours of the same intensity, or the inverse intensity. think about a colour wheel, theres the three primaries, then the secondaries, then tertiaries, etc. if you drew a line straight across from yellow, you'd find purple, which makes yellow and purple contrasting. across from blue is orange, which makes them contrasting, and across from red is green, which makes them contrasting. contrasting colours dont balance each other, but instead bring each other out, as long as theyre in equal quantities. if you have one contrasting colour that is less frequent than the other, the one in the smaller proportion will stick out much more to the eye.

sorry for the probably unneeded explaination above, but idk i'd rather not do hw so i'm sorry i'm using you as a scape goat. xD

the other issue i have with it is that the c4d style and the object focus' style dont match. the c4ds are way too 3D, while the object focus is cartooned, flat and outlined. making two mismatching styles fit well together is hard, but not impossible mind you.
i love love love the background, the colours look great with the object focus, and i love the fx you've used!!!!
overall, great job :D

its good but the bg doesnt suit a sharp c4d, the colours need a little work