For the first one:
hm the left side is abit empty, you could either try and crop down the size of the image to maybe try to add a C4D or a wallpaper to fill it out. I LOVE the second version but i dont know why lol just gives of a artistic feeling.
For the second one the background could be abit lighter where you have smudged it on the right and could maybe use a border other that that its nice ;)
10-10-2009, 03:58 PM
Ascarine
ty dude,
yea i know the right side on the second is a little dark, after i looked at it after doing the first i kinda thought hmm. Might try going back a few steps and not burning it quite so much.
I know the first one is a bit empty but i thought that if i but a C4D or a Wallpaper there it would look tacky so i didnt. Glad u like the V2 though ^^
10-10-2009, 07:59 PM
XenoDestruction
B&W version got my eye! its a bit plain on the left side as said Nevad. But overall good job, as always Ascarine.
10-11-2009, 05:18 AM
Ascarine
ty dude
10-11-2009, 06:45 AM
Xelo
wow i love the second one, but as said above it is a beit ampty on the left. took the liberty to add some things to show what i would do: (hope you don't mind)
it is just a thought, and i hope you are not mad at me ??
10-11-2009, 07:36 AM
rockerdish
The smudge is quite plain.... you need more smudge layers so you can fill the blank space with atleast a textured BG.
10-11-2009, 04:50 PM
Ascarine
looks good Xelo ^^. Never been able to use the clone b4 lol i always fail miserably
10-12-2009, 03:57 PM
Ascarine
Any one else?
10-12-2009, 05:49 PM
--J.O.N--
first of all start working on kompo+blending...
10-12-2009, 08:06 PM
gr4ph1kP4ND4
meh, the object gets way too lost in the bg, and theres not enough contrast =\ i love the placement, and the fx look great, and they really accent the foreground well. gj :D