Touch Me - Rihanna

http://npshare.de/files/82b0fc7f/TouchMeRihanna.png

What do you think? I don't really like it.. xDD

well i like it a lot and in my oppinion i think just to lower opacity a bit on those stars that falls on her face to make it look more realistic

Clean the face and u have a nice tag there.

Lacks flow. Nice smudging. Bad face. Nice concept. Space is too empty. Text ain't too shabby but I would drop it a bit lower.

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Originally Posted by Takken

Lacks flow. Nice smudging. Bad face. Nice concept. Space is too empty. Text ain't too shabby but I would drop it a bit lower.

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what he said, hate the face effects bit nice concept. Cant really see effects goin on, c4ds?

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Originally Posted by XenoDestruction

what he said, hate the face effects bit nice concept. Cant really see effects goin on, c4ds?

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C4Ds aren't really necessary for this, IMO..

anyway, it's cool, but work on the lighting, and make the flow more vivid, it's lookin' pretty plain right now.

also, i suggest getting rid of the lines under the text...they're adding too much focus to the text, and the text is pretty decorative enough, IMO..

Has anyone got an idea how I could add some flow?

Okay, here is my second version:

http://npshare.de/files/a4f78f2e/TouchMeRihanna.png

You think it's better?

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Originally Posted by Touch

Has anyone got an idea how I could add some flow?

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oh my the cleaned face is muchobetteros, but the ornament in her hair turns white over the bg wich is no good. (wrong layersetting) Flow should be in the direction of her looking imo; something like this:

http://img259.imageshack.us/img259/7...hmerihanna.png


:confused:

^agree.

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Originally Posted by Xelo

oh my the cleaned face is muchobetteros, but the ornament in her hair turns white over the bg wich is no good. (wrong layersetting) Flow should be in the direction of her looking imo; something like this:

http://img259.imageshack.us/img259/7...hmerihanna.png


:confused:

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Oh yeah, you're right. Gonna change it. Thanks.

Okay, now I corrected it a bit. But I begin to hate this stupid sig! And the flow sucks!! :D

http://npshare.de/files/714f4e76/TouchMeRihanna.png


Oh shit, now the render needs to be sharpened - damn!!
But I won't do anything now. This sig irritates the shit out of me! :D

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Originally Posted by Touch

Okay, now I corrected it a bit. But I begin to hate this stupid sig! And the flow sucks!! :D

http://npshare.de/files/714f4e76/TouchMeRihanna.png


Oh shit, now the render needs to be sharpened - damn!!
But I won't do anything now. This sig irritates the shit out of me! :D

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lol.. i know that feeling !!