Squirtle!

hey well been practicing a bit more still fail a bit with ma text haha so this is what i got

http://i625.photobucket.com/albums/t...tlebyeddie.jpg

feedback please on how i can improve it :)

Wow. This is pretty cool, the lights are nice as well as the colours and the flow is meh, but that can be improved:) The squirtle text isn't working for me, to be honest I think it would look better with no text at all. The border works here, nice work on that. I'm thinking the deep blue colour in the botom left needs to go, it draws attention away rom squirtle because it's so dark. Minor adjustments can make this one better, overall nice work.:)

oo thanks :) yea ill fix sum minor stuff up soon :)

the bubble effects are extremely well done. and great depth.

things to work on=
-lighting- the lighting is kind of all over the place, make it more focused on the focal.
-the white bubbles coming out of his mouth need to be erased - they look LQ and dont fit well.
-on the far right side of the sig there is a part of a HUGE teal bubble, erase that
- the text is my least fav part of this- try putting it on overlay and working with its opacity.

overall well done, one of your better pieces

It's pretty nice. Has a nice mixture of blues in there and the lighting is pretty good. I don't like the text at all, try using clipping masks. :D Need to blend the focal in a bit more though. Good work overall, keep it up! :)

thanks guys im make sum of them adjustments soon

Nice depth and colour. Love the bubbles.

thanks :)

updated it a bit to sum advice i was given

v2
http://i625.photobucket.com/albums/t...quirtleedd.jpg

yeah nice one

thanks :D

Ok, Personally I like Number 1 with the text and without that glow. What you can do is move the Eddie to the Underline, but have the Eddie part erased out of the line, if ya know what I mean. :p

I can see some areas look sharp. If you see the bubbles, you can see a pixel like edge around them. You can also see this on some of the black lines.

Quite nice mate. Keep up the good work. ;)

thanks ill go do sum more minor adjustments soon :P

anymore feedback guys?

bump lol

I love the bubbles, but the face is to light compared to the rest of the sig, either tone down the face or ligthen up parts of the sig. Also blend him in a little more he still looks like a copy and paste job. Other than that its very nice mate. GJ

ok thanks :P but it is better blending then what i done last time haha :P

v2 is better, the text looks much nicer. still a few things to work on= you can see the >render>clouds on the bottom right corner of the sig, cover that up with black or some more bubbles.

ok then ill fix that up soon :P

ok sorta fixed sum things up lol

http://i625.photobucket.com/albums/t...uirtleeddd.jpg

Thats better mate. Whats going on right below the to right corner like right next to his mouth. The giant black spot thing? I would try and put something there.

ok :O