Full Metal Alchemist

Just made the sig :D hope u guys like it! CnC please :D
http://i254.photobucket.com/albums/h...nfat/pav22.jpg

you are realy pumping them out haha, good going :)

fna is my favorite anime, so the sig is instant win in my book :P

a small suggestion would be to try and blend certain pieces, like his elbow on the right in a little,
something i often do is get a 40/60 pix soft brush on 10/30 % opacity
and just carefully delete some small parts on the edges of the render
so it blends in with your background more easily.

I keep saying it over and over again. lol. If you're gonna do an Anime sig, do it ALL anime - including the background!

Other than that it's good. The text needs some work. IE: getting rid of the faded duplicate and rethinking its composition. Possibly getting a better typeface. I recommend Garamond or Trajan, if you have it (Trajan is unlikely to be on your PC).

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Originally Posted by Sparda

you are realy pumping them out haha, good going :)

fna is my favorite anime, so the sig is instant win in my book :P

a small suggestion would be to try and blend certain pieces, like his elbow on the right in a little,
something i often do is get a 40/60 pix soft brush on 10/30 % opacity
and just carefully delete some small parts on the edges of the render
so it blends in with your background more easily.

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kk ill try it for v2 thx :D

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Originally Posted by Soap

I keep saying it over and over again. lol. If you're gonna do an Anime sig, do it ALL anime - including the background!

Other than that it's good. The text needs some work. IE: getting rid of the faded duplicate and rethinking its composition. Possibly getting a better typeface. I recommend Garamond or Trajan, if you have it (Trajan is unlikely to be on your PC).

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kk o.o and ill find those fonts :D and may i ask how to do anime background? o.o

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Originally Posted by chonfat

kk ill try it for v2 thx :D

kk o.o and ill find those fonts :D and may i ask how to do anime background? o.o

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Watch anime films and look at the effects they use for various actions/motions ;)

Garamond will be on your PC by default. It's a good title typeface.

if your looking for fonts btw, google dafont, its a realy good website for fonts.

kinda plain... lol :)
but its still nice :)
try to make the pentool go around his hands.. hehe :)
Gj chonfat! :)

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Originally Posted by Soap

Watch anime films and look at the effects they use for various actions/motions ;)

Garamond will be on your PC by default. It's a good title typeface.

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kk ill try to do it o.o

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Originally Posted by Sparda

if your looking for fonts btw, google dafont, its a realy good website for fonts.

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thx :D

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Originally Posted by schultz

kinda plain... lol :)
but its still nice :)
try to make the pentool go around his hands.. hehe :)
Gj chonfat! :)

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kk ill do for v2 :D

V2! C4D added, New Background and New Font: CnC please :D
http://i254.photobucket.com/albums/h...fat/pav22f.jpg

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Originally Posted by Sparda

if your looking for fonts btw, google dafont, its a realy good website for fonts.

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Really it isn't. It is a typeface graveyard.

You get some purdy descent typefaces on here: http://www.fontsquirrel.com/

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Originally Posted by Soap

Really it isn't. It is a typeface graveyard.

You get some purdy descent typefaces on here: http://www.fontsquirrel.com/

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1. what is a typeface graveyard, lol
2. sweet site mate, thanks for the post

not good,
you should work harder you exel more

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Originally Posted by Kritez

1. what is a typeface graveyard, lol

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that ^

and i never heard of that one, il try it out next time im looking for a font :p

as for the sig, good try on the c4d :P
the sig is very bright/sharp now though.
you might wanna tone that down a little.
the brightness itself isnt that bad. but it takes away some details from his face.

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Originally Posted by dub

not good,
you should work harder you exel more

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lolz wat is exel?

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Originally Posted by Sparda

that ^

and i never heard of that one, il try it out next time im looking for a font :p

as for the sig, good try on the c4d :P
the sig is very bright/sharp now though.
you might wanna tone that down a little.
the brightness itself isnt that bad. but it takes away some details from his face.

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T.T idk wat to add now... just take off c4d and brightness and ends up like before -.-

mhm, my suggestion would be to erase some of the brightness layer/s on the area
arround his face,

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Originally Posted by Sparda

mhm, my suggestion would be to erase some of the brightness layer/s on the area
arround his face,

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so lets see... make it darker and take out the c4d... kk...