War the Horseman

latest sig.. text needs work

http://img98.imageshack.us/img98/101...rsemancopy.jpg

Try to work on your text or just don't put text at all.
i like the concept of this, i liek the effects but try to clean your c4d a bit, looks tad messy.

agree with HD

horible text style,bad effects,bad lights , color and all about this sig xD

Agreed with HD

you have fire effects above and below the render. i would get rid off one. (the top one actually) if you make that the same "spacy" as the sides, it would give you nice depth and a much better compo.

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Originally Posted by zahradkar

horible text style,bad effects,bad lights , color and all about this sig xD

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thats hardly constructive is it ? o_o

nice sig, it could use some improvements like the others already mentioned,
but i like the concept, and work on the text i guess, wish i could help ya but my
text is even worse :p

to xelo i dont have fire effects on top the red strand is part of the render and when i did this on my laptop it looked completely different haha it wasnt as bright and the render wasnt as sharp thanks for the cnc i agree with the messyness and the text

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Originally Posted by JustInCredible

to xelo i dont have fire effects on top the red strand is part of the render and when i did this on my laptop it looked completely different haha it wasnt as bright and the render wasnt as sharp thanks for the cnc i agree with the messyness and the text

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i didn't mean the just red part... i meant the whole white part above the focal.. and so what if it is a part off the render?? there is something in PS that is called the "eraser" tool. lol

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Originally Posted by zahradkar

horible text style,bad effects,bad lights , color and all about this sig xD

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Please leave the void. Kthanks.



I was trying to use this render before, but I couldn't find anyway to use it, this sig isn't bad. I like the bottom effects but maybe if you got rid of the top one it would look good. Also work on the text, but I'm not Einstein at text either so don't listen to me :P But overall, good sig.

For me, the text is kinda distracting
Try to make it smaller and use clipping mask and stroke it with 1 px
besides that, I like the effects and lighting.
Gj on that sig!
KIU

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Originally Posted by JustInCredible

latest sig.. text needs work

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everything needs work