new style.

been trying out this new style.

http://img696.imageshack.us/img696/7...targirltag.jpg

Cnc.

I like it, nice flow, but the focal looks very plain. Try making more gradient and lighting adjustments to liven it up.

ok. ill fix it wen im home.
anymore cnc?

lol i recognize that c4d you used! nice placement! but as kotora said it is flat and lacks depth. still i like it a lot. ;)... and you play guitar?

no. but i really wanted to play it.
hows the text?
i experimented with it a little:D.
heres v2. adde some colored spot and tweaked some levels and curves.
http://img202.imageshack.us/img202/8...irltagedit.jpg

Oh yeah I forgot to say but I really love the text! definitely the better ver.

Its nice, i like it. but the focal point is more to the text then to the render, add some depth.
If you dont know how? just say you don't and ill tell you how.
overall its a good tag and the text is nice.

i thought the depth is ok.
blurred the bg.
tweaked the levels and curves to make it darker.
wat are the other ways?

Try to stay away from anime and get more towards hq renders and stocks of actual people.

i seldom use stocks of real people not my style:D.

too blurry especially compaired to the text. colors are boring... meh... i'm just... bored by it... sorry thats really mean to say but... yeah... layer it with other stuff, use the image to your advantage, take lines of motion use them as guides, use natural points of focus on the object of focus to create a great background for it.... meh... its just nothing special at all... sorry :(( (now i feel like a bitch for saying all that...)

thnx ill try better next time.\im still a noob anyway:D.

uwah! I love the update with the colours. It looks great.
maybe try to blur parts of the render itself? like the back arm. would add more depth yes?