Battlegrounds Tag

Made this for a battle with ssen

http://i359.photobucket.com/albums/o...an7/Battle.png

Battle is here : http://www.gfxvoid.com/forums/showthread.php?t=58714

CnC If you want...

donut i gotta give it to you, i love your style, this is really nice mate.

only complaint is that the render looks alittle lq for me

keep up the good work dude

I notice the Lq too, I figured i could sharpen it but that didnt seem to work. Thanks for the CnC

ugh
object of focus
wayyyyyyy off
my eyes are drawn to that black thing on the right, i dont even know what it is...
purple looks weird, doesnt match.
the thing on the right is kindof depressing... compaired to the girl who's leaping for joy? out of place... way too much going on
girl needs to be more in focus and also closer, she's too small compaired to the fx....
no shadows or any lighting interest, no lines of motion... blahh :(

its good, just not... good.... idk...

^ No Point whatsoever, ill take it as flame out of envy

sorry... :(
i didnt mean to sound mean v.v
i'm bein bipolar today cause i'm exhausted and sick and bored and shtuffs

so tone it down by about 3k times and you'll have what i really mean

I just don't like amature - low amature people cncing bad on sigs. It just gets annoying. Learn about tags and what makes them good first before giving "expert" opinion

ouch...
just cause i dont use renders doesnt mean i'm not better than you at the logistics of art.
if you were better than me, then you wouldnt have made those mistakes in the first place, those things i mentioned are pretty simple stuff that you should recognize: things with more contrast are going to catch your eye. the girl with the purple is bland and the colors clash. add that to the fact that the black shtuffs is sharper than the girl just makes it noticeably wrong...

Tags have an art style of their own, just cause you think you know a lot at art doesn't mean you understand squat about signatures

cut it off you guys.
donut its just her opinion in the sig.
yeah her comments are right. (the black thing really attracts my eye too).
just no hard feelings. and improve from what she said.
btw i also like ur style . keep working at it:D.
GJ on the sig tho.

dude... a signature is just a set canvas size for an image of art you create on a computer... any visual art has the same concept no matter what. literally its all scientific, its about how the brain and eyes react to color and shades and highlights and the way light reflects off of things and how motion physically works and lighting patterns and being able to read all that in order to create an image...

look im sorry that i'm a bitch about your art. i will say this: i love the background with the lined paper, it looks great with the snippets of words on top, but the focus object is killing me. thats whats messing with my mind in this signature. i'm trying to help you hear, give you some critiques to learn from. thats the only way you'll improve, its how i improved from not even being able to render a picture correctly to being able to draw a portrait from scratch, and its a cool process to go through because you can visually see your progress, but if you're not willing to listen i can tell you now that you'll never get past a shitty blurry render with an over emphasized background in clashing colors and interrupted shadows.

guys this is enough, i think you both took it alittle far.

Ok, it seems every thread in this is turning out like this more. A tip for tag, try some blending, you can blendin withought using brushes and c4d's and smudge. I am not buying this, its way overcontrasted, lack of depth is killing me. I agree with graphicpanda, you need to call in the focal more, my eyes are wavering all over the signature. Make it more compact, try adding something other than purple, or add some more colors. kritez has a good example of using colorwork in his current tag. At the moment, the purple looks like badly cut out shape you put in there so that the girl can be more viewable, and to blend it in you used some brushes with the same color on the girl. Crop off the right. No use atm. The torn paper background is looking good individually but its not at all fitting in this one, try something else.

Now something harsh.
Dude, Dont you go bitching everywhere. As long as you put it in here, you are adding your artwork for comments and critiques. Any type of cnc has to be welcomed, whether its harsh or not. If you dont like it, do not post it. Everyone has their own way of viewing the artwork. Everyone has their own eyes. When you do your work, you have to make sure the public likes it, not you. Even if you dislike but others like its success, if others dont like its failure. Its not like you are professional that whatever you do will be excellent. If you post your artwork with that type of view, forget about IMPROVEMENT.

Thank you.

I like this tag, but the lq render is bugging me.
otherwise, love it, keep it up n w n~b