Sprite Attempt

Pro or No

v1. http://i359.photobucket.com/albums/o...an7/sprite.png

too dark man... and eh... monotone... but yet nice try :D i guess if it wasnt that dark it would look nice?

i actually like the dark feel to it, but the sides might have a bit to much of solid black, still pretty sweet though.

i like it! heheh!

maybe too much negative space?

i dont really like text...

still, I really like it!!

gj man!

Its pretty good, There is a lot of negative space... The lighting up top is poorly placed its just.... There.. There could be more effect and flow done around the render but just a few touch ups and it could be real nice.!

Crop the sides and expand the lighting and effects a bit more.

Love the negative space, but maybe too much negative space? (just something to think about)

The effects look very nice, but its hard to tell because of your lighting and focal.

Sprites are difficult to really get down, so keep on working :)

yeh yeh yeh i love sprites!! the white spot is a bit too active without him doing something with it. He should beat that white thing or something... if you catch my drift??

http://i359.photobucket.com/albums/o...7/sprite-1.png

Cropped, anything else cba with

Nice tag, I like the flow of it.

i think the second version with the reduced negative space is an improvement,
looks nice man :)