Dante

CnC please :D
http://i254.photobucket.com/albums/h...nfat/pav47.jpg

so many views and no CnC yet :( cmmon people :(

hmmmm
the bg isnt all that good
theres a white stripe that just stop in the middle of his body
effet at his lower body is real good

but not liking the bg

Th render needs some more blending IMO.
I also don't like the space where I can only see the BG.
There is too much of it.... kinda too much negative space ;)

Effects at his lower body are pretty good.

Keep working at it chon :D

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Originally Posted by the1jah

hmmmm
the bg isnt all that good
theres a white stripe that just stop in the middle of his body
effet at his lower body is real good

but not liking the bg

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is that since now im not using renders at all... only stocks... try to add all the c4d's and effects spossibles to the bg but it looks like i fail :p and thx for the CnC :D

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Originally Posted by cs4pro

Th render needs some more blending IMO.
I also don't like the space where I can only see the BG.
There is too much of it.... kinda too much negative space ;)

Effects at his lower body are pretty good.

Keep working at it chon :D

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thx cs4 :D but idk wat to fill it with o.o since its a stock... :D

Fill it with brushes, c4d's and filter effects.. such things will make it less plain. ಠ_ಠ

KIU! :D

V.2 (more blended render, tried to take off the negative spaces) Better? CnC please :D
http://i254.photobucket.com/albums/h...at/pav47-1.jpg

Now some effects look overdone to me. and the render may blend even more.

wat u mean effects look overdone?

Just fill the space up with some c4d's.... Not too much cause then it will look too chaotic ;)
But I think some c4d's will help :)

I hope you dont mind that I edited ur tag, but I think that this part is too overdone/white/ and such.
http://img704.imageshack.us/img704/7063/overdone.png

And yeah... c4d's would fill it really well.

o.o the blade is overdone? o.o mmmm..... wat c4d should i add then :D

in my opinion it is...

Anyway, thats up to you, and show the result.

There! v.3! (added c4d, changed text and some colors and effects added) CnC please :D
http://i254.photobucket.com/albums/h...at/pav47-2.jpg

It was a good idea to try and fill it up with a C4D, however i feel this one (or the way its placed)
breaks up the flow somewhat, specialy the part behind his elbow.

all in all though, good job, keep it up chon :)

kk thx sparda :D