Vader

sisi:)
http://i54.photobucket.com/albums/g9...n/XeOOn118.png

This has potential, you've done well with the lighting and all that, but the text takes away from that, I tend to stay away from putting text on the render. Also, you could probably just crop the bottom of the sig because its practically black space.

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Originally Posted by kaka11kaka11

This has potential, you've done well with the lighting and all that, but the text takes away from that, I tend to stay away from putting text on the render. Also, you could probably just crop the bottom of the sig because its practically black space.

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Put your text little closer to focals head.
I am a big fan of SW i like it it's a bit empty but the lighting is epic :)
awesome job keep it up.

I think had you lessened the contrast in this and may be did a bit of blur to the right nice depth could have been achieved but it still has a nice perception of feel though. IThe placement of the render is spot on and the text is nice however the effects near the shoulder seems a bi confusing. I really don't know what is going on there and I find it to be a bit distracting. Also standard border pleased.

Your signatures never cease to impress me, i just love your style!

Thanx for your cnc people, heres a v2
http://i54.photobucket.com/albums/g9...XeOOn118v2.png

v2 is a bit too dark :S

i like this one ! cool effects around his shoulder.. nice and simple :D

v1 is still better imo!

v1 is better just make the text smaller. kiu!

thanx guys!