Its red D: <3 C'N'C PLOX

This was a recreation of a tutorial i saw somewhere once..
note i didn't use the tutorial at all.. i just remember i liked the outcome and this is my attempt at making it my own from memory ^^
hope you like it :
http://img85.imageshack.us/img85/6505/spidermangk.png

Imporvement?

http://img175.imageshack.us/img175/4622/spiderman.png

Further improvement:
http://img293.imageshack.us/img293/9748/spidermanf.png

Despite not agreeing with Vel i took what he said into consideration....
What do you think?
http://img194.imageshack.us/img194/970/spiderman2g.png

EDIT* looking at them next to each other now the sharpening had the opposite effect to what i thought which is a good thing : D
thanks for the help Guyyysss

I'm liking how it looks like spiderman is bursting through a wall of flames.

But, I think they are TOO blurred.

KIU

marks out of ten?

I'd say 6.5/10 due to the fact I like the concept of him bursting through the flames.

If you hadn't of blurred all of the flames it may had looked much better imo.

keep up the work though mate; you are improving. ;)

bc any better?

The third one is much better;

you added darkness which makes it have a better light source imo.

keep up the work man!

It took me way to long to notice what the render actually was. Too blurry man.

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Originally Posted by Vel

It took me way to long to notice what the render actually was. Too blurry man.

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Since The light source is behind spiderman and VERY bright and hes surrounded by fire, the blurred effect is quite realistic IMO ^^
and if you didn't notice it was spiderman straight away, well your just being over critical....
TBH i think spiderman is spot on in this one still not happy with the rest of it however... :/

I think it's better now. Great work

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Originally Posted by bcfcant

I think it's better now. Great work

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Cheers man ^^

its better Now v3...
I like the Flames!
kiu:)

Cheers man ^^

The smudge element is too damn blurry! It really takes away from the color. Depth is not acheived by blurring your bg or fg! Proper color and lighting and contrast is what really helps to achieve depth! Not much to say. Work on your composition. I'm sure the color could have been a blast but the blurred fg ruined it.