Corruption

after 4 days of rest
http://i996.photobucket.com/albums/a...Corruption.png

v2
http://i996.photobucket.com/albums/a...rruptionv4.png
i really like this one.
cnc please

gosh noob
i like v2 more idk what else to say

Good lighting good Effects too many focal points
i would choose Either the right illi or the center one use the ones you dont choose a focal point as bg effects :)
That's just my Opinion

rofl, i was aiming for a flash back style.. i dont know how to explain it but the i really made 3 focals for it.
thanks for the comments :)

i cant see the diff between the two....

the colors m8 :)

I personally don't like the fact of the more than 1 focal idea although I'm loving the colours.

It looks good but needs more depth imo

kiu mate.

It needs some focus, I think you should blur the background a bit, and get rid of the text. Colours are pretty sweet, and the lighting is cool nice job.

heres the version without text and blurred bg
http://i996.photobucket.com/albums/a...ithouttext.png
thanks for the comments

The separate focals are too separate:rolleyes: and they stand out too much. There is no one definitive focal to appreciate. I like the color scheme but the multiple focals really killed it. Dislike the text. Got good color but poor taste:p haha, jk. Keep at it!

i think i know what you're tryin to acheive. try lowering the opacity of the renders used one render lowered more then the other

Agree with everyone else, not keen on the 3 focals, other than that it looks really good though, thats my only issue with it. Keep it up, great sig.

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Originally Posted by JustInCredible

i think i know what you're tryin to acheive. try lowering the opacity of the renders used one render lowered more then the other

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finally, some one knows what im tryna do :)

thnaks for the comments!

oh now i c what im suppose to be looking at >.< Great job.

love the colors on this the two focal points are a little distracting but came out nice.

thanks for the comments :)