My latest. :D

http://j.imagehost.org/0510/resistance.jpg
Please tell me what you think. I think it is my best so far.

Get rid of text, and border, You should probably set the yellow light to overlay, if you already did lower the opacity. Depth isn't bad, make a v2 and do what I said and see how it looks. KIU

yes deff remove the text. blending is pretty good and lighten up the lighting.

The text is essential though.

I agree with both of them :)

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Originally Posted by RunningMan

The text is essential though.

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No it isn't? haha

dont use text if it will make it worse, I suck at text so i never use it.

I want the text, a tip on how to make it look better would be far more useful then just telling me to rid of it.

maybe make less text... like only resistance with smaller text. and use a clipping mask on it. also if you want move it closer to the render...idk im not that good with text

I think the depth could be amplified if you use better lighting with color schematics and contrast. All I see is blurring and that doesn't really help. A soft blob doesn't create lighting. The lighting isn't good. Utilize more elements in the piece to help contribute to its composition. Work on your composition and lighting. Keep at it!

Hmm... How do you suggest adding lighting in another fashion?

booo text just experiment on the lighting and youll get what you want

text is no good.

also they yellow light seems very dull.

keep up the work.