Narsha in wonderland.

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07-04-2010, 10:28 PM
Fayfie

Narsha in wonderland.

http://fc03.deviantart.net/fs71/f/20...by_ImFayth.png

v2:
http://fc06.deviantart.net/fs71/f/20...by_ImFayth.png

v3:
http://fc02.deviantart.net/fs70/f/20...by_ImFayth.png
Yeah, I know its not the best tag I've made. Anyway, its Narsha from Brown Eyed Girls!

I did the fire fx along with the roses and stars.

cnc please. c:
07-04-2010, 10:38 PM
Liquid

i think it came out really good,the flowers are a little odd in this imo but it still came out nice kiu
07-04-2010, 10:40 PM
Fayfie

Thank you. c:

Oh and v2:
http://fc06.deviantart.net/fs71/f/20...by_ImFayth.png
07-04-2010, 10:42 PM
shiv96

Damn that fukin sick
i love it
<3
Its your best!!!
:)
07-04-2010, 10:43 PM
Fayfie

Quote:

Originally Posted by shiv96

Damn that fukin sick
i love it
<3
Its your best!!!
:)

Aww, thank you. ><"
07-05-2010, 05:14 AM
bcfcant

I would say this is your best, nice and simple.

although I don't like the text placement, I think it's too far away from the focal.

The only other thing I could suggest is moving the roses just over the render so it doesn't look so pasted on if you know what I mean.

Great outcome, kiu! :)
07-05-2010, 05:45 AM
Fayfie

Quote:

Originally Posted by bcfcant

I would say this is your best, nice and simple.

although I don't like the text placement, I think it's too far away from the focal.

The only other thing I could suggest is moving the roses just over the render so it doesn't look so pasted on if you know what I mean.

Great outcome, kiu! :)

Thank you!
http://fc02.deviantart.net/fs70/f/20...by_ImFayth.png
-and v3.
07-05-2010, 05:49 AM
Pulse III

Simple but very effective. It looks beautiful. KIU
07-05-2010, 05:55 AM
Fayfie

Quote:

Originally Posted by Pulse III

Simple but very effective. It looks beautiful. KIU

Thank youu. c:
07-05-2010, 06:03 AM
bcfcant

great job, you are definitely improving! :)

kiu =]
07-05-2010, 06:10 AM
Fayfie

Quote:

Originally Posted by bcfcant

great job, you are definitely improving! :)

kiu =]

Ah, that's good to hear. ^^
Thank you.
07-05-2010, 08:13 PM
Takken

I think the immediate BG could do with some sharpening like in terms of perception and depth on the sides. Sharpen those sides a bit. I like the elements but I would like see more of them in the canvas, of course intelligently placed. Work a bit more on your composition. Keep at it!