Halo Collab

Me and my buddy Dennis did a collab sig...

http://i28.tinypic.com/4shfgj.jpg

Thoughts?

the c4ds on the right look bad since they overlap MC but look further awayat the same time
other than that it was very good :)

Kinda messy on the left side... but the right side has some potential to add great flow to it. try taking out everything on the left side on the halo guy and adding c4d's or effects that go in the same direction as the right side. like this

http://i25.tinypic.com/2zh4phs.png
sorry i had to reuse your c4d like 5 times to try and create a sense of flow.. it might not look good

you should try and keep it consistent.
Keep it up though

Cheers guys, and great work Andrew. Luckily I didn't do any apply image layers so this should be a simple fix :)

Thanks guys, Those are some great tips. I tried to create good flow with the right side.

Tried a new take on the effects.... step in the right direction or no?

http://i31.tinypic.com/jkao1g.jpg

the right side is still fine, but the little lines and stuff that are going up and back are still messing with it a little.. im not sure how to tell you how to fix it but it looks good enough for what level of a designer you are :D

I moved the c4d which was causing issues earlier in order to go with the flow more.. those lines are probably from it, so I could take care of it.

EDIT:

Cleaned up a bit:
http://i30.tinypic.com/2ushev8.jpg

Doing a bunch more minor tweaks... will post another update later

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Originally Posted by SiriusGN

I moved the c4d which was causing issues earlier in order to go with the flow more.. those lines are probably from it, so I could take care of it.

EDIT:

Cleaned up a bit:
http://i25.tinypic.com/58ksy.jpg

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Hmm.. may i see the psd? if you dont mind so i can try and show you what i mean

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Originally Posted by Andrew

Hmm.. may i see the psd? if you dont mind so i can try and show you what i mean

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Yeah, sure. Give me a few minutes to upload it to mediafire. I'll edit this when it's done.

http://www.mediafire.com/?8je7bu4aufiwk1y

http://i30.tinypic.com/2qc47l4.png

B/w looks better in my opinion :D

http://i30.tinypic.com/t7ldte.png

i did what i could with what you had and added a little bit in there

Although I disagree with the text, I have to say your edit looks a lot cleaner overall. I'll have to take a look at my version again tomorrow and see what I can do :D

I may agree with the flow. But I love the color of this sig. The purple to blue melds really well. Good job to both of you on that aspect. As many others said, right side had good flow. One problem i see is on the left side, if you look at the chief's right shoulder. You see how sharp and pixelated it is? Something like that can ruin the comp of the entire sig. perhaps blur his shoulder or something. I like the text! All in all, a good tag imo.