Kaito Vocaloid

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Complements and Crit
I always get told what im doing wrong but never what i am doing right...don't troll

i like the effects on it but its a bit monotone

Everybody tells me my stuff is monotone aaand i don't what monotone means XD

monotone means there is a single color, its like all red, try adding a veriety (sic) of colors to make things stand out, also i can see the effect on the bow are nice but they are kind of dirty, meaning it looks grainy sort of like sand, it should be fluid imo. Try playing around with the color balance to not have that single redish color in the entire tag and i think it would be pretty good

as far as always hearing whats wrong thats sort of why we are here isnt it? i mean if no one tells us our faults how can we improve them?

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Originally Posted by Tatsujin79

monotone means there is a single color, its like all red, try adding a veriety (sic) of colors to make things stand out, also i can see the effect on the bow are nice but they are kind of dirty, meaning it looks grainy sort of like sand, it should be fluid imo. Try playing around with the color balance to not have that single redish color in the entire tag and i think it would be pretty good

as far as always hearing whats wrong thats sort of why we are here isnt it? i mean if no one tells us our faults how can we improve them?

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I was saying,there should not be too much negativity at one time.

i know what you mean, it sucks when you work on something and your actually pretty proud of it and all people say are bad things about it, but you have to realize that you are posting this for C&C which basically means "tell me what is wrong so i can fix it" and trust me people have no problem telling you what you did wrong. It is not very useful to know what is right without knowing whats wrong, this is how we grow as artists and as people in general. You have no idea how many negative comments ive gotten. If you want something positive, the effect on the bow is really well done imo and the light on the left side give me a feeling of a spot light, like he is actually performing onstage, both good points

It's alright. The effects look pretty good but it's very monotone.

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I always get told what im doing wrong but never what i am doing right...don't troll

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Dude. Stop crying. Honestly, you don't even know what trollling is.

It's called giving feedback so you improve your work.
If you're just going to get butthurt and cry about the criticism. THEN DON'T ASK FOR IT.
You know, it's always great to compliment someone, but that doesn't help you in anyway.
It just makes you feel better about yourself.

I agree. Giving hardcore criticism, like this:
"Wow, lol that's sig is so crap. Honestly wtf were you thinking? No lighting .. and your effects don't even work out.
Also there is no flow, shit is just flying everywhere. Don't even try kid, go back and redo it."

That's what you can say to be negative. But no one says anything like that.

agreed with all above statements lol

you just gotta ease up with the gradient maps to solve all your color problems, experiment with the colors on the render n such

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Originally Posted by Mega

"Wow, lol that's sig is so crap. Honestly wtf were you thinking? No lighting .. and your effects don't even work out.
Also there is no flow, shit is just flying everywhere. Don't even try kid, go back and redo it."

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slightly off topic but i think ive gotten a comment like that, almost word for word o_0 lol

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Originally Posted by Mega

It's alright. The effects look pretty good but it's very monotone.



Dude. Stop crying. Honestly, you don't even know what trollling is.

It's called giving feedback so you improve your work.
If you're just going to get butthurt and cry about the criticism. THEN DON'T ASK FOR IT.
You know, it's always great to compliment someone, but that doesn't help you in anyway.
It just makes you feel better about yourself.

I agree. Giving hardcore criticism, like this:
"Wow, lol that's sig is so crap. Honestly wtf were you thinking? No lighting .. and your effects don't even work out.
Also there is no flow, shit is just flying everywhere. Don't even try kid, go back and redo it."

That's what you can say to be negative. But no one says anything like that.

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And kids what is above is an example of trolling...don't be like this guy

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Originally Posted by Mega

It's alright. The effects look pretty good but it's very monotone.



Dude. Stop crying. Honestly, you don't even know what trollling is.

It's called giving feedback so you improve your work.
If you're just going to get butthurt and cry about the criticism. THEN DON'T ASK FOR IT.
You know, it's always great to compliment someone, but that doesn't help you in anyway.
It just makes you feel better about yourself.

I agree. Giving hardcore criticism, like this:
"Wow, lol that's sig is so crap. Honestly wtf were you thinking? No lighting .. and your effects don't even work out.
Also there is no flow, shit is just flying everywhere. Don't even try kid, go back and redo it."

That's what you can say to be negative. But no one says anything like that.

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Wait I guess you are kind of right but you should start a sentence like that... it starts fights

lol funny people here here xD

anyway about the sig
i like the effects your text needs some work and in this sig i think it is to tight you know how some people say u have a lot of extra space but i think it is the opposite here maybe make a big canvas and leave a lil room other then that i think it is a awesome sig keep working hard :)

Ok well you've heard enough about the fact that it's too monotone, adding some other colours in there would greatly improve your work. The lighting is pretty good and like what Tatsujin said the effect on the bow is really nice but it loses the quality in some places. Basically aside from the colour theres nothing findamentally worng it just needs fine tuning in places.

Now onto what Mega said, that's not trolling he has a very valid point the problem is that a lot of people get sick to death of anyone who comes on a forum and either ignores the criticism, defends against it or like you did asks people to not be negative. It's the swings and round abouts of asking for CnC, while it does suck when people point out the bad things and don't always point out the good ones you just have to take in what they said and improve on it. Remember if they don't say something is bad then it probably means that it's not bad or good so just read in between the lines.