Spiderman - Fav

Definitely my favorite so far.

http://i33.tinypic.com/2zovv3o.png

CnC please?

I don't like the coloured boxes, it seems they have no purpose at all. There's alot going on in the sig and the focal doesn't really stand out, plus the text goes over his face. I'd say it needs more depth and the text to be either made smaller or away from his face. Apart from that, I like the effects and the text is good, but it just needs to be moved like I said.

Alright, well I adjusted the text properly.

Blurred the BG a bit more.

More CnC plis?

Way too busy, don't like how vibrant the text colours are in comparison to the rest of the tag, which is quite soft. The "The Amazing" font is pretty boring. Effects over the focal are a no-no, as he's getting a bit lost.

It's not good but you have potential

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Originally Posted by Delite

It's not good but you have potential

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I need criticism, not people telling me that the signature isn't good.

Honestly if you're going to give horse shit feedback then just don't do it.

Tbh, I'm not a fan of your signatures either, but I just don't say it isn't good ..

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Way too busy, don't like how vibrant the text colours are in comparison to the rest of the tag, which is quite soft. The "The Amazing" font is pretty boring. Effects over the focal are a no-no, as he's getting a bit lost.

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Mkay. Thanks, tbh I'm not that great with text, so I'm probably just not going to use it if people find it to look like crap.

Yes, that's EXACTLY what I was thinking about the text color, but I tried to change it to something that coordinates and it looked even worse.

Um. Yeah, I somewhat agree with the effect thing, but there really isn't any effects over the focal, just slightly over his hand and arm.

Kay, well I could've erased some there, xD.

na man I like the blue effect on his arm TBH

Just I think those dots over his face could go.

Also the red effect on the left. Dunno how to explain it but it kind of doesn't fit IMO.

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Originally Posted by Slayerplayer

na man I like the blue effect on his arm TBH

Just I think those dots over his face could go.

Also the red effect on the left. Dunno how to explain it but it kind of doesn't fit IMO.

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Mkay. Yeah, I think I can understand what you mean by the red, I don't want to totally remove it. But, I will try to make it blend in a bit more, so it isn't that strong.

Thanks for the feedback guys. Anymore feedback is always appreciated.

it is a bit over stuff it looks like u wanted to add alot of stuffed to the sig
the text is ok i like the blue over his arm but im dont like the box like things and the yellow spot on his head isnt working the smudging on the left side is to dark in my opinion

Well all in all a pretty good tag Good work

Hmm. Good work on the depth, I think you did that well. I'm not digging the text. There's too many different colors here in my opinion. I'm seeing all sorts of pinks, yellows, blues, purples, oranges, reds, browns and so on. It's just too many colors in not enough space. There's not much flow but there does seem to be some developing in his left arm and just under the text. Lighting also needs some work. Keep trying, you're getting there.

Thanks.

So, now I know that there is too much going on and I can see that with the clipping masks.

I was trying to keep the flow, but I kinda lost it when I added the C4D's on the bottom left.

Text I already know is crap, just experimenting atm until I get better.

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I'm seeing all sorts of pinks, yellows, blues, purples, oranges, reds, browns

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So what, I'm multi-cultural?

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Originally Posted by Mega

Thanks.



So what, I'm multi-cultural?

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I lolled :p

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Originally Posted by GFX_MC

it is a bit over stuff it looks like u wanted to add alot of stuffed to the sig
the text is ok i like the blue over his arm but im dont like the box like things and the yellow spot on his head isnt working the smudging on the left side is to dark in my opinion

Well all in all a pretty good tag Good work

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Ok, Im not a wealth of information when it comes to sigs and art. however I do like your work alot. I know from my past criques that everything is going right with the basics, I was thinking maybe try matching lighting effects on his head with the blue over his arm. Is there any way you can change the color of your light source on his his to a light blue? I think maybe it may flow a little better, just a suggestion to try, and if it doesnt work then once again i have to tell you that im new to this stuff :p

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Originally Posted by Mega

Definitely my favorite so far.

http://i33.tinypic.com/2zovv3o.png

CnC please?

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Drop the boxes, and the text. The stroke looks terrible on them, and they're way too attention grabbing. Your focus should be on your stock, since it's just so much nicer to look at than your text, so stop trying to grab the eye with it. I'd clean up his face a little, too, there's too much going on overtop of it. I'd also try and do some more subtle things to bring the focus more to your stock, like darkening the outside edges, or desaturating them, by the tiniest bit. The key to doing that properly though, is subtlety.
Tight effects, just needs more work to bring attention to them, so the eye isn't all over the place.

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Originally Posted by Vicious Zen

Drop the boxes, and the text. The stroke looks terrible on them, and they're way too attention grabbing. Your focus should be on your stock, since it's just so much nicer to look at than your text, so stop trying to grab the eye with it. I'd clean up his face a little, too, there's too much going on overtop of it. I'd also try and do some more subtle things to bring the focus more to your stock, like darkening the outside edges, or desaturating them, by the tiniest bit. The key to doing that properly though, is subtlety.
Tight effects, just needs more work to bring attention to them, so the eye isn't all over the place.

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Yes, I cleaned it up, http://i35.tinypic.com/2qwmnid.png

The edges are darkened. I just don't find it to be suitable to darken it too much.
Text I know already isn't that great.