how bout now?

ok seeing how i got such horrible reviews on my last 360 piece that i did, i decided that it was shit and i needed to redeem it, i think (or at least hope anyways) u all will like this one better. not like it particularly but at least better then the other. well here THEY are, lol gotta help me decided again which is better, i have such a hard time with decisions.

EDIT: Ok i took illegal's advice and bings advice and changed it up a bit. and illegal i didnt put a lightning reflection because it actually made it worse. and if u dont notice i spiced up the ball a bit gave it more of a shine.Ok now this is it, just between these 2 which is best?


http://usera.imagecave.com/unspoken7...0Redeemed3.png

http://fapomatic.com/10/360fullbackground.png

I like them,especially the first.Just not the text. Its too plain, you need to have a text with some life in it.

lightning is nice but the font is not good.

i tried going for the real font that MS uses, thought it was appropriate.

I think it looks awesome. Try a different font, and also I like the next-gen text centered. I like the lightning effect, but if you are going to do that then just do lightning on the first half then maybe do a reflection, that keeps the image looking clean. It's confusing to the eye as it is.

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Originally posted by Illegalx17@May 22 2005, 10:26 PM
I think it looks awesome.* Try a different font, and also I like the next-gen text centered.* I like the lightning effect, but if you are going to do that then just do lightning on the first half then maybe do a reflection, that keeps the image looking clean.* It's confusing to the eye as it is.

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ok so u mean just have the lightning on the top and not cross over into the bottom right?

yea pretty much, maybe try to make a reflection of that as well.

ok thanks a lot for the advice, i will surely give it a try.

it looks nice.

it would be better to use some effects on your fonts. and the metal ball dosen't give out a metallic reflection of lights.Maybe you can adjust the gradient setting and add a slight round inside highlight on the edge of the metal ball.excuse my bad english.

yea i know, i usually do put some effects on my fonts but i wanted to use the real font MS uses for xbox 360. anyways thanks for the advice, and ur english isnt bad at all, its better then some americans i know lol.

they look really good man.
A hell of a lot better than the previous :P
I like the reflections! As already said, font could be better tho.
but hell, that's minor detail :D good work.

Nice edits! The first one is awesome, but you might wanna reflect the lightning too. The second one is sweet, but maybe dont do a reflection on that one because now the logo/lightning is reflected but not the bg :P.

I WANT THOSE LIGHTNING BRUSHES :(