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08-31-2010, 05:55 PM
ketg

janitor sig

http://i167.photobucket.com/albums/u...x1/JANITOR.png
i'm look for some tips and tricks to improve :)
oh and cnc is also happily welcomed (:
08-31-2010, 06:00 PM
Sparda

I couldnt help but laugh a little at the Janitors face :p

If you ask me the effects covering him are kinda chaotic, i would try and keep that a little cleaner.
Also, the colours look kinda washed out and dont really add anything imo.

good job though, keep it up.
08-31-2010, 06:04 PM
ketg

Quote:

Originally Posted by Sparda

I couldnt help but laugh a little at the Janitors face :p

If you ask me the effects covering him are kinda chaotic, i would try and keep that a little cleaner.
Also, the colours look kinda washed out and dont really add anything imo.

good job though, keep it up.

i have been making my effects quite chaotic lately
i'll try to work on that XD
(i lol'd when you said the sig needs to be cleaner,irony)
08-31-2010, 06:27 PM
Sparda

Im not quite sure if Chaotic was the right word to use, but the white just covers up alot in an odd way.
08-31-2010, 06:30 PM
ketg

http://i167.photobucket.com/albums/u...er_janitor.png
here is the render
but i think i know what you are talking about the white part
08-31-2010, 06:30 PM
limpouros

u always have things on your focals xD
08-31-2010, 06:31 PM
ketg

Quote:

Originally Posted by limpouros

u always have things on your focals xD

this is true XD
08-31-2010, 06:41 PM
sirenzo

having it on your focal is fine but u need to have it go in one direction and you lighting is all wrong on here try fixing that up so it doesn't look too bright . or wait for better suggestions on fixing this i know a few but not on top my head at this moment. gl m8 kiu
08-31-2010, 06:45 PM
limpouros

Quote:

Originally Posted by ketg

this is true XD

if the things on your focal ment to be the water from the spray, you should try doing a part not all with some ocean ripple.try to keep it clean :)
08-31-2010, 07:50 PM
ketg

Quote:

Originally Posted by limpouros

if the things on your focal ment to be the water from the spray, you should try doing a part not all with some ocean ripple.try to keep it clean :)

thanks for the tip (:
i might try that
08-31-2010, 09:00 PM
Slave

I like the fractal or c4d or w/e you used on this one it does suit it! good that the face is more visible, maybe tho you might wanna try a more lively colour c4d in the background, I notice it's kinda the same colour as his shirt
09-01-2010, 03:07 AM
Vicious Zen

Quote:

Originally Posted by ketg

http://i167.photobucket.com/albums/u...x1/JANITOR.png
i'm look for some tips and tricks to improve :)
oh and cnc is also happily welcomed (:

It's pretty cool. Depth is obvious, I'd align the text with your flow, you have a more vertical flow throughout your whole piece. The bottom right part of the bottle feels kinda pixelly though, not sure if that's just me. I think it could use a splash more color, though. Other than that, pretty nice. =]