Version 1
http://img85.imageshack.us/img85/2705/pen1e.jpg
Version 2
http://img826.imageshack.us/img826/7549/pen1.jpg
Original:
http://img237.imageshack.us/img237/1198/overlay1.jpg
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VERY BRIGHT
Well, by the look of his current signature, I think he likes it bright :) Hey, if it's his style, then I think it looks pretty good. (But yes... needs more of a visible background and maybe bigger stock?) kiu
Added the original stock to highlight the work.
Any more advice? Dont ever seem to get much feedback on my work here,
I think the canvas is a bit too big as the effects are quite subtle. I don't think it's much of a loss if you cut off the sides like this:
http://img825.imageshack.us/img825/4247/whutwhut.jpg
Other then the painfully obvious loss in quality that occured when I cut off the sides in paint (@school, no photoshop). Other then that it's quite bright but I like it.
Try to add some textures to this one, and if you can, bring the lighting down a notch (unless thats how you want it.), and try to create more flow - adding a motion blur to the guy in the direction he's facing, maybe, or, liquifying the bground to move towards his line of sight. I'm still new to this myself so this advice isn't that great but... just a personal opinion.
too bright. to fix this, lower the level of opacity on some of the bright layers in your psd. about 40 - 60% opacity should help reduce the brightness. also starting with a higher quality image would help, there is alot goin on in the original its very chaotic. good work and keep it up.
here's a link to my photobucket for some higher quality images. hope you find something.
http://s266.photobucket.com/albums/i...INO/?start=all
Not bad, am going to see them live in december :P
waaaaayyyyyy to bright... >.<
Added version 2, reduced the brightness and also removed the text for now.
I will make some more changes when i get some more feedback, and also add some text.
i say v2 with text man... and hell yea! PENDELUM FTW!
I think that V2 is rather nice. V1 is a little to much light and hard to see. V2 has a nice effect and gives off nice light. But i think you forgot to put your name on V2 :) ha
V2 is better, but still needs some work...
You always seem to wash out your stocks with too much light :D I like what you try to bring out of them and the feeling but imo this stock already has plenty of light to work from. Don't try to add so much as enhance :D
Also maybe try to bring back a little more c4d but only in patches :)