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CnC please
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Undercontrasted for a start. Then the right side is too colourful compared to the right side. And the text is in the wrong place
Spartan_killer thx for CnC but I'll decide where the text is
^ don't lash out at people giving u their CnC when that's what u asked for.
I personally agree with Spartan. The text counters the flow and spoils it for me. Lighting's a bit dodgy can't tell where it's coming from, looks like u've put it in the top right but the render's lighting is bottom right. That might just be me being blind though. You need to work on your focal and depth a bit cos it's all a bit flat atm. Also not a huge fan of the border colour but as the older people from here know i don't really like anything but black/white cinematic borders ^^ Keep it up though nd don't lose faith.
Ascarine, so much english words for me(little russian boy)
work on your contrast and text
but its nice
i cant see it :/
^
you have to let the page load for about 8 secs
^.^ oh yeh xD
hmm not bad i dont really like the render it doesnt flow well and colours are mashed together, umm why is there a random dagger comming out of like his chest coz i dont think its comming out of his hand :/ anyways GJ and KIU
love the "noise/distort" bring back the blue light so it doesn't look like there is a flat colour over it.
Sharpen your middle render and bring an extra to top and fade it around the sides a little/ an lower its opacity a tadd
Maybe stamp a splatter of render on the left just lightly to pull all together :)
but i like the colour on the one side and the softer side looks good :D
these are just suggestions :)
EDIT: you mihgt wanan go to "filter/other-high pass than leave the setting and hit okay than play with the layer settings until you find something clean an nice :)
than you can remove your "fake light source or white layer you have that it's making it look dull :)
may i have your render ?:D
The focal is to bright . Some of the effects around the focal seem to be grainy which affects the overall quality imo.
Work on the overall depth since there seems to be none. The burn tool in this sig would be your best friend.
The text itself needs to be worked on.
Something that also caught my eye is the whole left area since its darker than that of the focal it's takes away some attention to it.
The lighting itself could use some work aswell.
Otherwise this sig has potential but could use a bit of work.
