Business Card

Here it is:
Business Card by ~Deosion on deviantART
http://fc08.deviantart.net/fs71/i/20...on-d325u60.png

Pretty sick, I love the colours and the logo (MR).

Work Marty on gunz xD nice work Kap

$%!@'ing love it x100000

Really nice, but I can't stand the text that says "Design. Visual Effects. Photography. Cameraman." It's a business card, choose a very readable text. (Obviously Helvetica is the first that come to mind). Other than that, it is a stunning card and it's very well done!

Good idea, but very distracting with all the background effects going on. Try to simplify it, and maybe not as many of your white tube lines.

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Originally Posted by RunningMan

Really nice, but I can't stand the text that says "Design. Visual Effects. Photography. Cameraman." It's a business card, choose a very readable text. (Obviously Helvetica is the first that come to mind). Other than that, it is a stunning card and it's very well done!

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Thanks alot man its my first business card and I had the same idea about the font being hard to read may change it to impact in a bit to make it flow with the back...

Thanks for a great feedbacks guys...

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Hmm I am hoping that the distraction will give the card when printed like shadows and texture... It still depends on the print finish if he will go for like pressed out logo which I made the distractions will look great hope you guys know what I mean its hard to explain the images which i got in my head xD

:o not even a hey taylor or anything :( not nice Dev

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Originally Posted by uKing

:o not even a hey taylor or anything :( not nice Dev

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I was getting there first the important stuff then goes the nice stuff... :P

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Heyyyyy Tay :)))

to be honest you are the reason why I am here was just looking for some of your work want to see if my little nob improved when i was gone ;)

and what do you think :D

I wonder how much it would cost to print those will all that color lol.

Design and visual effects are a bit broad. If you gave me your card and it said design and visual effects, I wouldn't really know what that encompasses.

Hmm great improvment i could say im proud of you but to be honest if I was you I would stop making signatures try digital painting/web design/logos/album covers the first thing which i recommend for you is album cover as its kind of like a big signature... you have to start moving away from signatures as thats not going to help you in any way if you want to be serious in graphic designs... but overall a great improvement i mean fantastic some of the sigs i would say are better then the ones i used to make..

Btw you using photoshop cs5 now?

im gona get a tablet and start painting probs as im doing art & design at college but yeh il defo go with your suggestions and i still cant use pentool ^.^

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Originally Posted by Deosion

you have to start moving away from signatures as thats not going to help you in any way if you want to be serious in graphic designs

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I agree. Sigs are useless.

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Originally Posted by Monroe

I wonder how much it would cost to print those will all that color lol.

Design and visual effects are a bit broad. If you gave me your card and it said design and visual effects, I wouldn't really know what that encompasses.

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Hmm I wondered that as well but as its my first card and I don't have any experience in printing and stuff I am not the best at using 3-4 colours xD

The text on the card has been provided by the "client'' so i only copy and paste the ''design and visual effects'' so not my foult ;)

Thanks for the feedback


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Hmm I can only use pentool to the basics like rendering and stuff so not to woried about that hmm yeah signatures are great fun but it just doest help you as you wont improve as a graphic designer... the best thing to do now is to try coming up with a thing like portofolio and then improving it as you get better... this will just show you the idea of how hard it is to come up with something original and good and you should find out some info about dpi and some basic knowledge about printing as that's what I am trying out now...

whats dpi??

Its a huge point in printing as its Dots per inch its about the quality of the image printed as in if you set the dpi to 350 when creating the business card the image will be like 30 times bigger then the actual image which will give you great quality when printed as if you putted the dpi to like 10 it means the pixels will have to be exlarged into the size giving you strached pixels when printed... its hard to explain as i just started geting the whole dpi and print work which is complete different from digital work...

you know why this wont work? because it looks like a signature with all those effects goin on. Try simplifying it more. remove all the background effects.

much cute ^_^ i love the colors of this card thanx

:-bd nice job man

lol edwin, dont bump 2010 threads

sick design, very well executed

OP hasn't been active in a year, stop bumping old threads printchesco.

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