Crysis tag - My best yet

I may not be too good at tag making, but I think this one is my best yet.

V1
http://i52.tinypic.com/359d1rk.png

V2
http://i52.tinypic.com/31273h1.png
CnC please.

definately you're best yet
very nice :)
text placement could be better
but GJ

For sure your best! The only thing I can advise, is blending the render a little bit. There's an outline around the render on this one.

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Originally Posted by ketg

definately you're best yet
very nice :)
text placement could be better
but GJ

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Thank you, any ideas on text placement?

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Originally Posted by A Can Of Win

Thank you, any ideas on text placement?

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it's alright
i would of put it nearer the visor
but that's my opinion
it may not be a better placement XD

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Originally Posted by RunningMan

For sure your best! The only thing I can advise, is blending the render a little bit. There's an outline around the render on this one.

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I added a V2 to hopefully fix the outline.

What do you need the text for? It's not adding anything special to the tag. Don't move it to another spot, just remove it completely. The first version is better because of how crisp the render is, I'm not like the blending of the second one, makes it looks fake. You should select the render and delete the outer 1 or 2 pixels from it to remove the white outline.

defenly your best man nice depth in this and text im still not a fan of but like the effects gj kiu

I like the second one more, man. And I think the text is just fine.

i like it it's amazing kiu

The text is fine, I would lower the opacity on it to combat it from pulling away from your focal. And as for the blending in the second one, you could (just a suggestion) duplicate your original render, then move it above and smudge lightly and just a tad bit away from less busy area's set it to overlay and make your bottom layer visible again. Makes it blend in without giving a blur and you can keep the original crispness of the render like monroe said.

Congratulations.. is very nice work

I think it needs some work on the background, its really really empty appart from the guy and a few splatters (i suggest that you work on more splatters over it). On the other hand, the splatters are excelentley done. The text is well done except the placement, which could be higher up. Good work, KIU