Another Crisis sig

CNC please :)

http://i978.photobucket.com/albums/a...risisSufi2.jpg



http://i978.photobucket.com/albums/a...sSuficopy3.jpg


http://i978.photobucket.com/albums/a...ufiredtext.jpg

i hope v2 is better to you guys..3rd one is with a redish tint text

sorry cant grasp the concept. text placement is ok

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Originally Posted by starwar

sorry cant grasp the concept. text placement is ok

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what concept cant you get? Its a signature with a crisis 2 soldier in it, its smudged with some other effects in there, CNC please.

Smudge gets a bit overpowering, the position is good, so to are the colours, just show more focus on the Crisis dude. I agree texts position is okay, the text itself isnt that nice imo :/

Id love to see you have another go, could be awesome!
KIU

over smudged and over blurred. No defined focal.

Bring the render back in and blend it so you have a defined focal...my eyes are wandering over the sig trying to make out the soldier.

Thanks guys, i will give it some more work.

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Originally Posted by SuFi B A M F513

what concept cant you get? Its a signature with a crisis 2 soldier in it, its smudged with some other effects in there, CNC please.

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Ahh, the thesis of originality.

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Originally Posted by Monroe

Ahh, the thesis of originality.

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I was just admiring your creative genius.

Smudge is a bit over done. There's no depth. And there's no lighting. Try correcting those things and you could have a pretty good sig.

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Originally Posted by Monroe

I was just admiring your creative genius.

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thanks monroe, that means a lot to me man :)

i put some more time in this and added it to the first post i made here.

second version is alot better apart from the text
youve worked a little bit of depth in and made the focal more of a focal
very good.
ive noticed all your bgs are quite similar try doing something different in your next sig BG-wise :)
nice one dude

Thanks Dub, andI have some new ideas to tryout for a different type of bg and sig itself.

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Originally Posted by SuFi B A M F513

Thanks Dub, andI have some new ideas to tryout for a different type of bg and sig itself.

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good good :)