Marvel Evil

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12-12-2010, 06:30 PM
SuFi B A M F513

Marvel Evil

http://i978.photobucket.com/albums/a...agesigcopy.jpg
12-12-2010, 06:42 PM
fadedone

i like this one but it seems over contrasted again...also try using c4d renders to add more to the background to add more depth..
12-12-2010, 07:56 PM
Skaryface

TBH, its a mess. i cant tell whats going on. its over contrasted and sharpened.
text is half blurry, half pixely.
12-13-2010, 08:41 AM
Ebrithil

I have to agree, that although this sounds harsh it is a mess, you need to cut down and make everything run smoothly.

There is no depth or flow apparent in the peice.
it took me about 10 minutes to figured out what it was tbh. :L
Start again and use c4d and such, and make sure you use them to flow with the render.
12-13-2010, 12:08 PM
Monroe

Quote:

Originally Posted by Ebrithil

it took me about 10 minutes to figured out what it was tbh. :L

It took you 10 minutes to see it was Carnage and Venom? Lol I think that's more the fault of your eyes than his design.
12-13-2010, 12:14 PM
SuFi B A M F513

Thanks for the comments guys, I will most likey do a total re-work on this.
12-13-2010, 12:42 PM
Mountford

I like it, not entirely sure what the blue thing is :/ but the left guy looks awesome.

You should try just using him (and his effects) on another C4D background!
Great work bud
12-13-2010, 12:44 PM
Monroe

I see you were trying to add depth but imo the blur is too strong.
12-13-2010, 12:51 PM
SuFi B A M F513

I agree man, I didnt realize that until it was too late. Thanks.
12-13-2010, 05:23 PM
Ebrithil

Quote:

Originally Posted by Monroe

It took you 10 minutes to see it was Carnage and Venom? Lol I think that's more the fault of your eyes than his design.

Marvel evil didn't give me much of a clue, it's too sharp and it looks like Carnage's face has been blurred out?

I know for a fact SuFi can do better.
12-13-2010, 06:02 PM
Monroe

Quote:

Originally Posted by Ebrithil

Marvel evil didn't give me much of a clue, it's too sharp and it looks like Carnage's face has been blurred out?

I know for a fact SuFi can do better.

Carnage's face is sharp as hell, it's Venom's that is almost blurry beyond recognition.
12-14-2010, 03:33 AM
Ebrithil

Quote:

Originally Posted by Monroe

Carnage's face is sharp as hell, it's Venom's that is almost blurry beyond recognition.

Yeah.. i don't know which one is which... :P
12-14-2010, 04:29 AM
TRUeLM

It sure looks hectic...Also, don't blur venoms face xD
Other than that, kiu.

Also, though not as important, Venom is not necessarily evil. In at least 3 AV's, he was actually a good character.
12-14-2010, 01:11 PM
SuFi B A M F513

lol venom usually is an evil character, however i know he is know to play both sides... thanks for the input :) here is round two, i hope its better.

http://i978.photobucket.com/albums/a...undtwocopy.jpg