If I were king for a day, I'd make sure there was no tomorrow.

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02-07-2011, 04:58 PM
Fork

If I were king for a day, I'd make sure there was no tomorrow.

Not my best, not really feeling it at all. But I like to post all my works even if I dislike them.

http://i56.tinypic.com/v4uxx5.png
02-07-2011, 05:02 PM
Theo626

Its not really doing it for me either tbh. It seems a little to bright and almost out of focus. Try dodging and burning some of the areas next time. That being said, I like the splash of liquid coming off of him, I just think maybe the color of that could be changed some to make it the color pallet of your stock and render. Anyways, not bad and KIU!
02-07-2011, 05:05 PM
Fork

Yeah, I actually did a lot of dodging and burning trying to make the lighting actually work, but It just didn't do it for me.
02-07-2011, 05:06 PM
Theo626

Oh, is there anyway you can post the original. I would like to play with this image some.
02-07-2011, 05:08 PM
Highfly

It looks pretty smooth and I like it that it's not overhelmed with effects like some of your tags.The background looks kinda weird to me since you can easilly tell what part of the render it is.If you added a couple of more effects to his shoulders and burned the sides this could be epic.
can I haz render please?
02-07-2011, 05:09 PM
Fork

http://i52.tinypic.com/14jx3z9.png
02-07-2011, 05:22 PM
Highfly

thanks broski
02-07-2011, 05:35 PM
Mountford

I actually quite like this Fork :)
I think you could have been a bit more creative with the background, but I think what you did with the foreground render and effects looks good! Too add, I think you should have smudge the bits that have the yellow coming off, make them look as though they are eroding/crumbling away almost :S? if you get me?
Overall i think its pretty swish, nice work ^^
02-07-2011, 07:08 PM
Fork

Thanks guys. :D
02-07-2011, 07:15 PM
Mets08123

thats not too bad. i really love your fractals. the ones i have are pretty good. where did you get your fractals?
02-07-2011, 07:48 PM
Derosion

Contrast bro, contrast. You be lacking it.
02-07-2011, 10:53 PM
andoytoys

what exact outcome do you wan't to happen on this tag Fork? :P
02-07-2011, 11:21 PM
Fork

I want it to sing and dance and make me breakfast. D:
02-08-2011, 12:34 AM
andoytoys

Quote:

Originally Posted by Fork

I want it to sing and dance and make me breakfast. D:

ROFL! seriously wut outcome to be exact? though i agree with Joey that the tag needs contrast. or maybe check on VFX and get classed by the classer their.
02-08-2011, 01:50 AM
Fork

Quote:

Originally Posted by andoytoys

ROFL! seriously wut outcome to be exact? though i agree with Joey that the tag needs contrast. or maybe check on VFX and get classed by the classer their.

I don't believe in classing. It's just someones opinion on my artwork. I do things the way I like, I don't need to be classed. I'd say I'm probably in the solid novice area.
02-08-2011, 09:22 AM
andoytoys

Quote:

Originally Posted by Fork

I don't believe in classing. It's just someones opinion on my artwork. I do things the way I like, I don't need to be classed. I'd say I'm probably in the solid novice area.

well its really not someones opinion. =)) though i can't explain very clearly what classing really means. Yeah all of us like the things they do but in order to enhance that we need other views from people to grow, see the picture? Classing for example on vfx is all about finding your voice your own trend that only you can execute when doin sumthing. Now i dun wanna get too deep about this conversation because if it does it will end up in a never ending debate.

-Thats all for now.