Smudge-

Second attempt with this style, cnc is very welcomed.

http://img412.imageshack.us/img412/6...dgeakumav3.png

very nice ishamz i really like the bg smudge :) thats +wa for ya :) kiu

interesting smudge bg and good job on the lighting kiu

not bad. :P it just need a tad more cleaning and more detail, maybe reduce that grainy texture too it and add sumore fine smudge too it not to mention sharpening it. :3

Hey andoy =o
Thanks for the feedback guys.

flows all over the place and the lighting is off.

Apart from that it's nice, kiu :P

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flows all over the place

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Erm, how?

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Originally Posted by Derosion

Erm, how?

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the background smudge isn't going in one general direction, and it doesn't match the flow of the render either, hence it's messed up.

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Originally Posted by Ebrithil

the background smudge isn't going in one general direction, and it doesn't match the flow of the render either, hence it's messed up.

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actually it matches it pretty good lol

+wa. is a resource team not a design team xD

I've givin you a critique already.

http://img834.imageshack.us/img834/1...tsmudgesig.png

Pink is the smudge flow, blue is the render flow.

funny how the renders vote isnt just < for most parts its not even <

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Originally Posted by Timentia

funny how the renders vote isnt just < for most parts its not even <

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wtf? :L

i agree with the flow of the smudge it should match the render, its great details as a bg maybe go abstract and remove the render. also i think the render needs blending more
GJ tho mate <3