Midnight Waltz

This is the piece I made when I decided to enter the LP comp again. let me know what you think

http://fc02.deviantart.net/fs71/f/20...r_-d39z9h2.png

Its really damn big.. xD
But excapt the render nice imo.

Render looks LQ imo.

I like this, looks pretty cool. The only thing I'm not feeling are those little white sparkles, those kind always look low quality to me, but its good overall, I like it. :]

I like the white sparks, it's the render for me that kills it, she doesn't feel all there,

Have you tried maybe makign a dup of the render over top an putting it on low fill multiply ? I think this would give it more depth and bring out some of her features that seem to just fade too much,

cool stuff tho brah ^^

did that low multiply trick and lowered the size a bit (not on purpose...photobucket likes to resize)

http://i6.photobucket.com/albums/y24...ightwaltz2.png

I don't like the mood, quality, colors, blending, render, style, or stocks. Aside from that it's okay.

i think it's pretty cool maybe the c4 w a bit too much should have made it a bit shorter for the moonlight to hit the girl more, but i think was creative and deserves more cnc from this site ,

think you can do better monroe? battle you me..lets go

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I don't like the mood, quality, colors, blending, render, style, or stocks. Aside from that it's okay.

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think you can do better monroe? battle you me..lets go

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let me know what you think

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You ask him for his opinion , then you have to accept it. I'm not saying that Monroe said is the best way to say what you think, but he just did what you were asking for.

Now, about the piece.
I think it's a bit monotone and C4d spammed.
I do like the way you created depth, although having to focals (moon & her?) is distracting for me.
And I DID like the large size. what's wrong with a large piece?

Nice job on the space too, is that a stock or hand created? Either way, the piece looks nice.
Keep up the good work.

Lol sorry I don't have the time.

I don't like how the effects around her seem really messy and how they go over the moon, i think you should of made them in a kind of circular overall shape around her.
Apart from that it's nice.

@Applej: it's the manner in which he said it, or didn't you notice that?

Version 2 is much better with the overall feel of the image. I like what you've done here but the image lacks depth IMO since the 3d effects engulf the bottom half of the image. I would try opening up bits and creating more of a background so that it really emphasizes the size of the planet.

Good one!