another spiderman tag

this is my second spiderman tag it is yous to try do "shake" 2 colors and do the bg anly with c4d

http://img404.imageshack.us/img404/2180/spiderman2c.png
i don't like the text


Cnc pls

Nice concept, try bringing out the colors a bit more, especially the left side.
Kiu!

Oh yes, can you share the render, pwease ;3?

for the render click me =)

I like the feeling of it, and the contract colors too.

Like you said, the text is a bit off but overall it looks good. Did you render him yourself?

no no

I love how you blended the warm and cool colors together, looks great. Text is cool but could use a little work.

I really love the depth you have. Text does need work however. Nice render. I've never seen that particular spiderman render before.

awesome contrast and depth.

i really like this and the fact that is im a bit of a fan of spiderman but only problem i have is that it looks grainy ? lose that grainy layer and make it more shinny. and i like that your starting to use more clipping mask . kiu bud

you know wut you can just remove the text if you don't feel it. :P

Font could use some work