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Decided this isn't "crazy" enough to get good votes so it's a tosser ^^
Don't let simplicity fool you, this was a lot of work >.<
p.s I'm in love wiht lp now xD
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It's not don,e but before I go any farther I wanted some feedback )
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Can't really say because I can't tell what you did with it XD
May I see the original stock? Which movie is it from?
well i already can tell she rendered them out made the bg with liquid tool and colored in the eyes blue i think just need the correct lighting to make it feel like they should be there . kiu looking good would like to see it finished slave ,
at least that's what looks like to me lol ?
My all time Fav TV show The Tudors ^^
See this was what I was worried about, ppl might not think anything was done to it :P
kk so as you can see there is one leg missing from the couch xD some grabage laying o nthe floor, no real light source to speak of (missing under the couch, behind them) her hair is glowing xD and ofc the dredded text :P ( which btw was not dont with the bandaid because it made the drapes looked fudged >.< and than ofc colour changing, adding light putting in hair, giving shadow & putting the slave touch an all :P I still rendered this also so that I could properly get behind them and give the drapes good depth :D lol I'm inlove with manip ^^
thasks siren ^^ I can see why you thought liquid, I did have to "draw" in some of the drapes after I took out the text becuase it still looked really odd >.<
EDIT: I plan to add some white rose petals on the bed and ground to give it more contrast and another slave touch :P As well as fix the lighting up more on her back, leg , his face so that it's more natural and less of a made for tv shot kinda thing, becuase as it is there is still like 3 light sources, I'm just currently working on the one coming from the bottom left to top right.
i was right about the eyes too slave u didmae them brighter as well :) kiu
Nice cleaning and fixes. They honestly sucked while making this but you fixed it for them lol. Only thing that bothers me is the clip masks on the top.
Yea lps are cool. As long as you got a decent system. If not they are just pure pain.
I think his eyes are too blue, but that's pretty good.
thanks peeps for the feedback ^^ I was unsure about the dangled thingies ftw, I'll try an play withthem more, if I can't get it to work I'll just toss it, lol yes they did suck making it, have no understanding why they left it so bad :S Guess they wern't expecting an artist to actually look at it :P
sfx you are correct also, I just thought it might have been my own monitor making it looks like that, I'll clean that up also ^^ looks too fake :)
practising for the test your tallent battle slave? :D
I like this a lot you did some good fix-ups on the ligtning and the depth also you made the quality better of the lq places. I dont like the green dot lines on top of the lp, i think u should delete them and let it be..
Nice manip slave :)
yeah gaaf ^^ already working on my tyt lp, and almost done now with double focal :P
But I deff think after this tourney that I might just stick with lp maniping, it's too much fun :P
very nice pic slave the subtle manips are not that detectable, you are right about the thingys on top they need to go or be worked on some more to fit in better. keep this goin lovin the tudors too.
In my personal opinion, I like Manips that are extensive enough that the original stocks and the new art piece look completely different to each other. For a first one this is pretty good as you are testing out your understanding in lighting and depth as well as blending.
Some flaws:
- Where you took out the text you left a dark shadow mark. Try to blend that in a bit better so that the shadow doesn't look so much like a brush mark.
- Your shadow under the couch possibly needs more. There's a dark patch, but it gets lighter the closer we come to the dress. With a dress there naturally there would be less light so you would end up with a large dark area.
Positives:
- The lighting is alot better then the original. I can see you're regular skills in light enhancements and glows showing on this image and it looks great.
- The Hair is 100 times better in yours. It looks cropped out in the original and kinda cheap and nasty.
- The Matrix code for some reason suits it. :p
Nice job there and I look forward to seeing more manips!!!!!! :D
Thanks nutter for the great c&c detail ^^ this piece isn't as blow out as my next one ^^
This one I just always liked tudors so I didn't want to lean away so far from the original image.
The original manip i did with this the black curtain was gone and I had like a grand hall kinda thing in the bg , but talking with naynay an he said best thing to go is subtle ^^
