Weeping Night Siren.

http://img217.imageshack.us/img217/1599/80717074.png

c&c ?

I love that color purple/blue, so i like it anyways. ;p

tbh i am really disappointed at you slave. The colors are really good and the depth is fantastic. Although, i would move the girl more to the left so that the tag will basically have 1 focal rather than 2 because right now the light from outside also gets my attention(it maybe just me idk lol)Moving the render to the left will also improve the lighting because the rays of light would match the lighting on the renders body. The effects are really well placed and the girl is so hot. i am disappointed at you because you did not give this to me as a gift. well done slave :)

Well in this kind of stuff mostly background and render style doesnt match. I mean your render is like a painting while your background is more realistic.

Ligthing looks a lil fake. I dont know why though. My shitty eyes tells me so.

That wine(i dont know) needs blending with the skin.

Try to get your focal closer to the middle. Right now it is too far.

Probably thats it from me atm. KIU. Manips are fun

I dont know how you are schultz, but my attention goes to the tree on the left. xd

yeah I know about the focal being center, she started off as just me playing, and becuase at the time I didn't wanna try an manip in the piece of violin hat was missing :P

I kinda like though that the bg is distracting, I spent a lot of time on it, would be a shame for it to be ignored. The original lighting on the girl actually came from below her :P that might be why the "lighting looks odd" I had to put in a new light and try and get rid of the old one. I also liked the idea of making real and "fake" come together so I actually tried my best to make her look painted but the arches look real xD

I am going to manip her more center and try an put in the violin >.< But before I did anything drastic I wanted to check out the waters with ppl ^^

Thanks for the feedback guys :D Schultz you actually want a gift like this ?:D

can you show stocks what you have used here? to see what you have really done :)

Np, but I will point out, it's not exactly what I have done it's if you like what you see :P Regardless of what I did or didn't do, the point is, does it look smart/right/good.

girl
http://img151.imageshack.us/img151/4...bytanit.th.jpg the light coming from below, where as mine comes from top back right. (under violin on the arm was a bich >.<)

arches
http://img31.imageshack.us/img31/617...hestock.th.jpg It's daylight in this pic and as you can see no creepying plants or similar shadowing to give off from my stock

bg garden
http://img225.imageshack.us/img225/3...bywyldr.th.jpg

lol I'm not about to load up all the plant life and brushes :P you get the just of it ^^

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Originally Posted by Slave

Np, but I will point out, it's not exactly what I have done it's if you like what you see :P Regardless of what I did or didn't do, the point is, does it look smart/right/good.

girl
http://img151.imageshack.us/img151/4...bytanit.th.jpg the light coming from below, where as mine comes from top back right. (under violin on the arm was a bich >.<)

arches
http://img31.imageshack.us/img31/617...hestock.th.jpg It's daylight in this pic and as you can see no creepying plants or similar shadowing to give off from my stock

bg garden
http://img225.imageshack.us/img225/3...bywyldr.th.jpg

lol I'm not about to load up all the plant life and brushes :P you get the just of it ^^

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wow
what you did to it is sick

Thanks time :D I wanted a more drastic look for void so that they could see the "skillz" I might be forming from my first few attempts at manip :D

I got a new one I'm working on and it's !!! OMFG full of layers xD

Still stuck on illusion tyt theme tho >.< lol hope I get thrown out of the comp before I show any failure at that xD

I will be continuing to work at this one though, now that I got some more input as to what needs to be fixed up.

I find when I would get c&c with my tags that I would just move on and try better next time, where as in my lp's I actually have a drive to fix them up xD Almost fixed with my Tudors one actually and will be hosting v2 next :)

Thanks again ppl, Really appreciate the input ^^

well, it is nice concept and good work.. but
main problem is lighting, you did good job but it is not right, when you want to create realistic lighting/shadows I can advise you use line tool and make rays of light and track them, then it is simple to create real light and shadows, cuz you will see where light falls..
her hand in front is much lighter than is supposed to be.. actually it is valid for the entire woman.. it unnecessarily complicated it by that architecture, it will be much easier and maybe even nicer if she will be in that park..
I like the whole concept, good choice of girl (hot like u :)) best part of this work for me are eyes, beautiful.
Those haze effects work pretty nice, they are making nice atmo.
and now I have to go.. if you want more feel free to PM me ;)
keep it up Slave!

Will do !!! It's a good idea about putting her in the park, I thought about that, but than I thought my forground would be very empty looking becuase here is so much of it. Good idea about the tracers I will deff do that, and at first my idea was her in the middle of the room, thats why her arm is lit up more so than if she was to the side, like I said, ganna move her more to the left, try your rays thingy. Dont think I will change how she looks tho, in terms of ftw saying it looks liek rl an paint together, I kinda liked that look ^^