The Ripper

figured I would start this section off with one of my older pieces. I titled it the Ripper. Can't remember which little prick inspired this poem, but I banned him from my old forum, and sent him this poem right before banning him lol.

"The Ripper"
By DOMINO™


Fake designs discourage creativity,
Lacking Inspiration, Lacking Nobility
Stealing for the Need,
Disgusted by the Greed



Always Disguised in Anonymity
Already Robbed of Dignity
A Loss of Respect
What Did You Expect



The sting of Discovery
No Sign of Recovery
Humiliation leads to Regrets
No One ever Forgets



Lies and Deception
Time for Self Reflection
Concealed Remorse
Confused Discourse



Pain is Caused
Life is Paused
The Damage is Done
The Ripper is Gone



Banned!

I totally loved this poem. I like the feelings that I get from it, almost as if I should be the one who is guilty. Great use of words brah ^^

Really like this poem man. Good concept and the flow and the wording makes sense:)

iloveit man!

Thx Slave that's kinda how I intended it to be, I put myself in the rippers shoes to try and feel what it would be like to be caught, apologize, and get banned. Finding words that would represent what I wanted was difficult.

thx emsee, takken appreciate that.

lol woot BANNNNNNNNNN HAmmer nice m8

lol ya Sir the ban hammer was my nickname on my old forum, lol banning pple is fun.

i lolled

lold on it too..

every ripper should be flooded with this poem on their inbox

epic :) loving it.

thx guys ya seems like I should start sending this to some rippers on this site, lol

COOL, lol i thought you found a ripper whe i saw the title.

Wow, this is actually a good piece of poetry. It's not based on the best theme, but it's very well done. You have talent, DOMINO.