Jawsome Poetry Slam voting Slave vs Domino

First to 15 votes wins.

Voids Cast
By Slave

One can say a great deal about Void
We could talk about the good or what leaves us annoyed
We can talk about the battle,tuts or bad ass teams
We could discuss the Sig of the week and controversial themes
Or about the owner John who has been gone for far too long
But what makes void so swell and so great
Is all the people you can call your mate
I apologize in advance if your name can not be found
I promise one day I'll get around

Lets start off with Nutter, the good cop of this operation
Who runs the LP comp and gives one innovation
To try new things and be true to yourself
He'll tell you being an artist is good for your health

Next in line is big bad wolf DM
Don't let his bark fool you, he can be a true friend
Quick with the ban hammer, 98% of the time just
His humor is infectious,it's really a must

Infectious brings the name to mind Apathy
With a second nick name joke as Crapathy
Mystery man of the lot, sometimes can't tell if hes joking or not
But a great guy to pal around
Even if he kicks you on the ground

Domino the playful, deep thought man we know
His art is fantastic, it gives a good show
Matches his charismatic attitude for life
His perfect timing in threads to knocking down strife

You could say Nathan is our Prodigy child
His art is flawless and filled with grace
His temper is mild, his threads give you pace
A man with many talents hidden inside
He shares them with void, he does not hide

Tay gives one inspiration to follow your dreams
He created ta, Voids resource dream team

Sirenzo the underdog of this group of names
His team TP will make it one day with great fame

Xelo one of our oldest members aboard
Hes got some lovely children,he lets their imaginations soar

Underoath, another daddy with a baby in pocket
His effects speak words, yes he does ROCK IT!

Fur and Bog can be put together
They both make us laugh no matter the weather

Gaafjeah is a wonderful youth with a fast mind
A way for turning everything out to be kind

I'll finish this list with one of our newest members to date
Dragon, just like me... smudge, WE HATE!!!

These Voidsters plus more, too many to write on one page
Make Void the greatest place,they are the cast on the stage
You give life to this forum and make it a home for artists to share
You give advice and praise, inspire and amaze
I make Void my gfx home because of you who care
I hope to you my words seem fair :)

http://img823.imageshack.us/img823/4...fasupermod.png

Wow. This is a tough one.

Dammit >.<

If I were to actually choose, I would have to become a bitch and be extra picky lol.

I like Slave's poem alot due to her involving lots of people here and talking about them, finding something 'unique' about each one. In DOM's poem I particularly like the description he gives of Slave and how he chooses to represent her status as mod here.

So to be honest, there isn't anything I would dislike here but in order to vote I'll choose one.

I pick DOM's due to his poem structure being better and the flow is more consistent (nothing that noticeable, like I said I had to nit pick really hard)

I'm assuming this is to be like like normal battles on the Void, but this time its just poetry ^_^

omfg , anyone who votes for me is an idiot xD

Domino, thats is one well laid own, beautiful image you have painted.
If it's about me or a angel regardless, this is one beautiful piece !!!

I give you my vote <3 that was beautiful!!!

p.s thank for making me feel so newb xD I want a rematch in a month :P

Jeez guys vote for this :)
I liked both a lot, both are touching some snares.
But i love how slave mentiont how the void can be so difrent with all these amazing ppl, so she gets my vote, :)

I really liked both but domino gmv :3

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Originally Posted by Slave

omfg , anyone who votes for me is an idiot xD

Domino, thats is one well laid own, beautiful image you have painted.
If it's about me or a angel regardless, this is one beautiful piece !!!

I give you my vote <3 that was beautiful!!!

p.s thank for making me feel so newb xD I want a rematch in a month :P

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Thanks Slave you inspired it, It's about both you and an angel, because both are one and the same. :)

as for the rematch any time is fine with me.

Both were really good, as stated before I liked Slaves mentioning of other void members and bringing all of the forum into it as best as she could but I liked Domino's just a little more so Domino gmv

Well like everyone else, I liked how Slave's mentioned several people and how they contribute to the community. They also both use a couplet rhyme scheme...but ultimately Domino's flows better and used more sophisticated language, which I enjoyed.

So Domino gets my vote, good job both of you :]

thanks guys, oh and Slave the poem is a gift for ya so please feel free to do whatever you want with it.

"Domino the playful, deep thought man we know
His art is fantastic, it gives a good show
Matches his charismatic attitude for life
His perfect timing in threads to knocking down strife"

lol I am Domino the playful hear me roar. lol thx Slave

Slave gmv, i liked both but she pulled me as im in it :D

pffww.. this is difficult!

Domino: very nice flow and good choice of high-words (is that what you call that?), but maybe a bit to pompous..

Slave: Chaotic (I find that charming) flow and use off common words (wich makes it more easy to follow)

I apreciate both styles! damn this is hard!
Being mentioned in Slave's poem makes me to biased.. she gmv.

DMN rmv, short, snappy and easy to take in, on top of that filled with love.

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Originally Posted by Xelo

pffww.. this is difficult!

Domino: very nice flow and good choice of high-words (is that what you call that?), but maybe a bit to pompous..

Slave: Chaotic (I find that charming) flow and use off common words (wich makes it more easy to follow)

I apreciate both styles! damn this is hard!
Being mentioned in Slave's poem makes me to biased.. she gmv.

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pretty much, ya well thx. thx rad meant to be that way.

dom get my vote, the meter and rythm of the poem are better, as well as the lexical choice.

Congrats Domino it was a very well made and lovely poem to read :D

p.s ^^http://img5.imageshack.us/img5/9327/dominopoem.png

thx slave for that and for the battle we will rematch soon. Glad you liked it at least, I knew it would make you cry when I was writing it :)

I originally started writing a eulogy for you as if you had died by my words. here is what I had started off with,
Slave's death eulogy lol

Through the hazy cloud of faded anonymity
She unmasked her heart with humbled tranquility
The quiet Beauty with no excuse
The one we all could call our muse
When all the words were said and done
Our beloved friend had come and gone

If trouble striked she saved the day
with no fear of death she paved the way
The wreched pain without her presence
darkens my soul my mind my essence
I can't believe I feel this way
The best has come and gone away

The love we lost will still remain
She lived she loved she felt our pain
From dusk till dawn her spirit pervailed
Her Endless creativity had never failed
I wish you all could rant and rave
About the one they all called Slave


I tweaked it and played with it till I got what I liked, went for more of a upbeat poem about birth instead of death.

I cant believe im actually reading a poem, both are really good but i enjoyed reading Dom's more tbh.
I know the competition is over but just felt like letting u guys know ur good lol :)