Sucker Punch SS Tag

So usually I don't post in c&c for my own tags but I have started to use c4d again and would like some input :)

Original image:http://img593.imageshack.us/img593/8...llpapers14.jpg

I rendered her but still used her same cloud stock (removed the plane and the walking robot thingy) as my bg because I felt it had great lighting to work with :)

http://img155.imageshack.us/img155/5041/suckerpunch.png

I would like to know what the general populas feels about this new c4d style I'm trying out.

p.s I do see now when I look from before and after with a lot of my renders what ppl say when they say it is a "Slave tag" I guess I tend to make things glossy almost like glass or plastic and smooth things out and give it a lift of colour.

can I have teh c4d please

there are 4 :P and one fractal ^^ lemme find them an I can pass it off to you

yayy thanks bubby

Is that my gift? :D

woah this is very awesome......love it very much <3

Thanks ^^ I really did a good number on her face and colouring because the before image was just too soft in some areas and too hard in others

I tried to give purpose to all the c4d used so that it felt like it was melded together and gave good gap for the light show. I also tried really hard to play with colours and more than just 2 colours like usual tags so that it felt more realistic in that sense.

I knew I was going up against mio and mio uses his depth very well but his colours always seem a lot softer to me than his depth and light source, so I figured going in strong on what he usually goes soft on would contrast our tags against each other and really let the voter focus on each tag individually. :) lol I hope it worked anyways xD

He usually does smooth and conform and atmos is his key, so I went with jagged, hard and bright :D

I love mios style, but it is something I just can't pick up >.< lol so might as well be his opposite, guess I think too deeply when I go into battle >.<

we are the same i also love mio's style

final version looks great slave pink looks much better than the green, good work.

Yeah, it was a perfect fit :D thanks mate <3

thats amazing man if not almost perfect really love what you did there with the c4d

great tag slave as i mentioned before on msn i feel the c4ds was a bit out of place but maybe give it a flowers or something look pretty cool . but nice light effects kiu .

that tag is so slave!
lol just keeding
awesome job slave, nothing bad to say ;/

I like how you put in good thought into the tag, that is impressive:).

I like the tag, you brought out the colours well, and the c4d work is solid.
However, IMO, it is sorta lacking in depth, looks a bit flat, and I'm only saying that cuz I'm trying to find something to criticize, but all in all solid tag Slave:)

Thanks folks :D

I agree with you immortal, I am a pretty crappy tag maker when it comes to rl images, and c4d tends to be the only thing I can think of with rl renders, that being said I hardly play with c4d becuase i suck at rl xD

Trying to make something look like it has depth, I could only work with the render in giving her shadow under the c4d on her shoulder and hand and hat. The rest of it I just flew by trying to find "depth" in between the lights and the neighbouring counterparts >.<

That being put out of the way, got any idea how I can fix it ?:D

One word. SEXY! I love the coloring that you added because the original stock you had was so flat but now the colors really stand out. The pinks and the yellows look outstanding. The C4D's blend with her and the rest of the colors in the sig. You did not overdo it with the C4D's. Great lighting as well. KIU meng.