TPS #2 The Poetry Slam voting

Thanks to all who entered. Theme was "you"
No voting for yourself, most votes at end of poll wins.
Winner will pick theme for next the next Slam

Razer GFX

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Fuck My Life
by: DOMINO

I have small legs I have small arms
My head is filled with Lucky Charms
When all my friends have let me go
They all will feel the pain I know
Give me a reason to keep on living
Find me an excuse to keep on giving
My passion for life is never ending
My vices are only smoking and spending
I will never share my deepest fears
The secrets that bring you to tears
I feel my anger slipping through
This poem is about me bitch not you
I won't tell you how much I suck
Cause you don't give a flying fuck
If I don't rhyme then I don't care
Just thought that I would share
My life on paper doesn't impress
My life's a mess no more no less
Fuck my life

The Inner Fight
by: Slave

I was told right from life, the moment I knew
I would never amount to much, I would never pull through

From here to then, locked in a basement with no sight
That I would grow up one day and see the vision of light

I was laughed at, made to feel shame for other peoples crimes
I was told long before that these were cold and dark times

No kiss on scrapped knees, no "I love you good night"s
But this made me a good mother and gave me moral strife!

I give gifts every day in hopes to prove my soul
In every little way to make me feel whole

Gifts of hugs, gifts of kisses, gifts of words to heal the heart
Gifts to make me forget the begnning of my start

This history isn't told for you to shed tears of sorrow
This is to show that stronger I will grow tomorrow

That you might fall in a stereotype bracket of loss
Does not mean you should always count yourself cross

Life is what you make it and will always stay true to your desire
As long as continue to build your own empire

The inner battle will be won once you fight back for a new life
And reward yourself with feelings and friendships you know is right

Blood and your beginnings does not make you who you are
It's the person who stands today who has come this far.

I voted for Slave because was deeply beautiful and even though you weren't describing how you look physically, I have a pretty good idea at how you look on the inside. Good work Slave. I liked Razer's because that's something I would have came up with and I rapped Domino's like a white trash noob :)

White trash noob all the way, lol I was laughing after I wrote that, cause I sound depressed or suicidal in that poem, lol its not that hard to find something to rhyme with flying fuck.

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Originally Posted by DJFX

I voted for Slave because was deeply beautiful and even though you weren't describing how you look physically, I have a pretty good idea at how you look on the inside. Good work Slave. I liked Razer's because that's something I would have came up with and I rapped Domino's like a white trash noob :)

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Well I have been told I don't need a paper bag over my head to screw me xD
Thanks for the vote.

Domino this persona is so out of field for oyu, I totally like it, I would have never thought you had this feeling in you ^^

I liked Razers but not the bg :S

very nice from all participants, Domino gmv

When does this poll end? Bump.

it say's right at the top of the poll. "This poll will close on 05-23-2011 at 10:17 PM"

Oh okay x.x.

Slave really did it - she really told a story

Sudden death, poll closed so next vote wins. Slave 3 DOMINO 3

well it was close with slave and domino fuck my life was interesting lloll so i vote domino nice job u 2 sry slave .

DMN wins