Stary knight

http://i1034.photobucket.com/albums/...003/rush-1.png

I like the compo and flow Lighting needs a bit of work everything is a bit to dark. Also the head are looks a bit choppy. Could use some more effects around the focal point

I'll work on the effects but I was trying to make everything dark like that :S.

Idk if I can recut the render very well but I'll try.

If you dodge the bright spots in the back a little it'll help with the depth, and try just taking like a 45 px eraser brush and lower the opacity of the brush and erase around th choppy parts.

okay and just made:

http://i1034.photobucket.com/albums/...003/rush-2.png

V1 i think is better because those dark spots are lowered in opacity.
the render is better in v2 though.
kiu!

v2 would be better if you reworked the back spots.

http://i1034.photobucket.com/albums/...003/rush-4.png

i like this better...your latest version
http://i1034.photobucket.com/albums/...003/rush-4.png
even tho its too dark..but i like it..it gives emphasis to the colors

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Originally Posted by Manga

http://i1034.photobucket.com/albums/...003/rush-4.png

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Alot Better! :D

Lighting needs work. Burn some areas