On fire Lp cnc

didn't know in which subforum i had to post this, but here it is: my 3th ever LP :p

V1: http://img571.imageshack.us/img571/6...irelpsmall.png

V2: http://img862.imageshack.us/img862/9...elpv2small.png

V3: http://img580.imageshack.us/img580/8...elpv3small.png

V4: http://img808.imageshack.us/img808/1...elpv4small.png

Cnc plz, and say which one you like the best, and why :p

Ps: srry for the size, i will make them smaller ;)

resized :p

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http://i55.tinypic.com/2e4zp91.png ( <<-- credits to mountford)

I do like V3... I don't like the text in the first two and the 4th the flames are missing their detail from the the third. So number 3 it is for me. Did you make the flames yourself?

Good concept, though the lighting needs some work on the color and such. Keep working at it. Looks great so far.

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Originally Posted by Nairda88

I do like V3... I don't like the text in the first two and the 4th the flames are missing their detail from the the third. So number 3 it is for me. Did you make the flames yourself?

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nah, the flames are a combination of fractals and a nebula stock ;)

This should have been posted in the Digital Art sub forum.
I don't think this is bad at all for your 3rd LP. Your main problem is the lighting. When I saw the top of the picture before scrolling down I really didn't expect it to be those colours. You need to find a way to blend in the colours correctly while making it look natural and smooth.
Good job, keep it up.

Looks like a bunch of fractals.

i already saw it on the other forum ^^

(yes i registered here )

the fire is just to intense and the tekst doesn't fit there on that way

you should blend the fire more with the stock and make a background :) (imo)

Needs better blending in my opinion, show more of the girls neck